Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Online shopping is now replacing shopping in the store. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In today's fast paced Digital era, everything is available on the internet. This development in technology is highly constructive and has made these new trends in evitable. Online shopping has become immensely popular among customers from all around the world. Purchasing has never been more convenient and handy. In this contemporary and professional environment, every individual is bound to their hectic schedule and it gets tough for them to take out time to go and shop in stores. With internet shopping, they can now shop and their personal convenience. Moreover, shopping through the web is not restricted to any particular state or country. Therefore, this proves to be a strong point in providing ease to customers to buy products from their ideal choice of local or international brand. For instance, Indian buyers can now shop from foreign labels that are not yet having a presence in the Indian retail market but can be readily accessible online. Apart from fashionable products, the e-commerce categories have also diversified. Presently we can browse items like grocery, electronics, pharmaceutical and other numerous purchasing merchandises online. In addition, through the aspect of an owner of any store, online shopping helps in reducing rent, labour wages and other unnecessary expensesThat are incurred with maintaining an actual physical store located in an urban centre. What is shopping websites like Amazon and Flipkart provide a wide range of products along with suitable delivery time and date. They have catered the needs of shoppers entirely. Furthermore, people can also filter any item the desire to purchase by adjusting the settings to the particular colour, size, quality, quantity and price the prefer according to the needs. In conclusion, who would not prefer to save their time and money by shopping online which provides us with great deals and satisfaction. Replacing physical to accessible on fingertips stores is indeed a positive development.
In
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
's
This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.
fast paced
Digital era, everything is available on the internet. This development in technology is
highly
constructive and has made these new trends in
Possible spelling mistake found.
evitable
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
has become
immensely
popular among customers from all around the world. Purchasing has never been more convenient and handy.

In this contemporary and professional environment, every individual
is bound
to their hectic
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
schedule and
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
tough for them to take out time to go and shop in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stores
. With internet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
, they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
shop and their personal convenience.
Moreover
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
through the web is not restricted to any particular state or country.
Therefore
, this proves to be a strong point in providing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
to customers to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
products from their ideal choice of local or international brand.
For instance
, Indian buyers can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
shop from foreign labels that are not
yet
having a presence in the Indian retail market
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
can be
readily
accessible online.

Apart from fashionable products, the e-commerce categories have
also
diversified.
Presently
we can browse items like grocery, electronics, pharmaceutical and other numerous purchasing merchandises
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
.
In addition
, through the aspect of an owner of any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
store
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
in reducing rent,
Possible spelling mistake. ‘labour’ is British English.
labour
wages and other unnecessary
Possible spelling mistake found.
expensesThat
are incurred
with maintaining an actual physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
store
located in an urban
Possible spelling mistake. ‘centre’ is British English.
centre
. What is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
websites like Amazon and Flipkart provide a wide range of products along with suitable delivery time and date. They have catered the needs of shoppers
entirely
.
Furthermore
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can
also
filter any item the desire to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
by adjusting the settings to the particular
Possible spelling mistake. ‘colour’ is British English.
colour
, size, quality, quantity and price
After ‘the’, do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of ‘prefer’ is correct. If ‘prefer’ is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the prefer
according to the needs.

In conclusion
, who would not prefer to save their time and money by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
which provides us with great deals and satisfaction. Replacing physical to accessible on fingertips
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stores
is
indeed
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
development.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Online shopping is now replacing shopping in the store. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts