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online purchases lead to economic growth

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Nowadays most of the people perfer to shop online as a result of this Shops in towns and cities are going to be closed. In my view, shops will be closed one day due to the increase of online shopping. This essay will examine the reasons for the clousre of shops. In my veiw, online shopping is tremondusoly growing day by day because of improvement in the technologies, Enormous availabity of online shopping websites in the internet and purchases. Moreover, In order to attract the people they start making offers with discount facitilites. for Example, In shop of one dress may cost upto 1000 INR but in online it costs low when to that. Furthermore, The availabaity of wide varatites of items. for instance, clothes wit different colours, with Particular sizes which fit them. In addition, people may busy in their daily baisis as a result of it they won't have enugh time to go out and buy thing. For this reason, they choose to buy the things in online which in turn reduces the sales and growth of shops in many cities. however, People who are habituated to particular shop they always tend to buy products in that shop. one more example, They beleive the quality, worth towards the product and shop owner. Also people think they can enjoy the way by buying thourgh online To sum up, Shops are closing since more purchahes were done thorugh online. Still few are there having interest towards offline shops. Finally we have to balance the purshases.
Nowadays most of the
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people
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perfer
to
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shop
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online
as a result
of
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this
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Shops
in

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towns
and cities are going to
be closed
. In my view,
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shops
will

be closed
one day due to the increase of
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online
shopping. This essay will

examine the reasons for the
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clousre
of shops.

In my
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veiw
,
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online
shopping is
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tremondusoly
growing day by day
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because
of

improvement in the technologies, Enormous
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availabity
of
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online
shopping

websites in

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the
internet and
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purchases
.
Moreover
, In order to attract the
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people
they

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start
making offers with discount
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facitilites
.
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for
Example, In
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shop


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of
one dress may cost
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upto
1000 INR
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in
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online
it costs low when to that.

Furthermore
, The
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availabaity
of wide
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varatites
of items.
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for
instance, clothes wit

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different
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colours
, with Particular sizes which fit them.
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,
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people


may busy in their daily
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baisis
as a result
of it they won't have
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enugh
time

to go out and
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buy
thing.
For this reason
, they choose to
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buy
the things in
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online


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which
in turn
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reduces
the sales and growth of
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shops
in
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many
cities.

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however
,
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who
are habituated
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shop
they always tend to
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buy


products in that
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shop
.
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one
more example, They
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beleive
the quality, worth
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towards


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the
product and
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shop
owner.
Also
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people
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think
they can enjoy the way by
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buying


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thourgh
online

To sum up,
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Shops
are closing since more
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purchahes
were done
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thorugh
online.

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Still
few are there having interest towards offline
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shops
.
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Finally
we
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balance the
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purshases
.
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IELTS essay online purchases lead to economic growth

Essay
  American English
13 paragraphs
255 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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