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One reason for crime is that many people are poor.

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One reason for crime is that many people are poor. This tendency lies in the demand for high living standard that perhaps those who have average income eventually cannot keep up with. As a result, most destitute people have to do illegal actions such as stealings or even killing other people to appropriate the property. This must considered as a serious problem in every era. The way forward for the government to creat new jobs to help dwellers deal with their very basic demand to survive. This may motivate them to
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many
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people
are poor. This tendency lies in the demand for high living standard that perhaps those who have average income
eventually
cannot
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keep
up with.
As a result
, most destitute
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people
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have to
do illegal actions such as
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stealings
or even killing other
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people
to appropriate the property. This
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must
considered as a serious problem in every era. The way forward for the
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government
to
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creat
new jobs to
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help
dwellers deal with their
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very
basic demand to survive. This may motivate them
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to
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IELTS essay One reason for crime is that many people are poor.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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