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One reason for crime is that many people are poor.

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One reason for crime is that many people are poor. This tendency lies in the demand for high living standard that perhaps those who have average income eventually cannot keep up with. As a result, most destitute people have to do illegal actions such as stealings or even killing other people to appropriate the property. This must considered as a serious problem in every era. The way forward for the government to creat new jobs to help dwellers deal with their very basic demand to survive. This may motivate them to

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