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Familiarity between Technology and Science

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As they are completely different fields but they are interdependent on each other. Also, it is due to science contribution we can create new innovation and build new technological tools. Apart from that, the research conducted in laboratories contributes a lot to the development of technologies. On the other hand, technology extends the agenda of science. Regularly evolving technology has become an important part of our lives. Also, newer technologies are taking the market by storm and the people are getting used to them in no time. Above all, technological advancement has led to the growth and development of nations.
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they are interdependent on each other.
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, it is due to science contribution we can create new innovation and build new technological tools. Apart from that, the research conducted in laboratories contributes a lot to the development of
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technologies
.
On the other hand
,
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technology
extends the agenda of science.
Regularly
evolving
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technology
has become an
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important
part of our
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lives
.
Also
, newer
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technologies
are taking the market by storm and the
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people
are getting
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to them in no time.
Above all
, technological advancement has led to the growth and development of nations.
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IELTS essay Familiarity between Technology and Science

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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