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how to make Cacao beans

how to make Cacao beans 86grB
on the one hand, the initial step commences when cacao trees are grown in S. America, Africa, Indonesia. when pods are harvested when they are rip and red and white cacao beans are collected. Then beans are fermented by banana leaves and beans fermented are spread in sun to dry. After being dried, these beans are put in large sacks until they reach 64kg. They are transported to factory by train or lorry.
on
the one hand, the initial step commences when cacao trees
are grown
in S. America, Africa, Indonesia.
when
pods
are harvested
when they are rip and red and white cacao
beans
are collected
. Then
beans
are fermented
by banana
leaves
and
beans
fermented
are spread
in sun to dry. After
being dried
, these
beans
are put
in large sacks until they reach
64kg
. They
are transported
to factory by train or lorry.
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IELTS essay how to make Cacao beans

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
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