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One of the most serious problems facing most big cities is traffic congestion.

One of the most serious problems facing most big cities is traffic congestion. XlKnA

In conclusion, traffic congestion is one of the most common problems that every large city is facing these days. Traffic jam is caused by too much cars on the roads as well as high volumes of cars that come into the cities from the suburban areas. Cities in the world can relieve traffic congestion by forming more car pools, by building rapid transit systems from the suburbs to the cities, and by improving public transportation systems within the cities. In my opinion, traffic congestion isn’t a big problem in big cities any more if the government has some suitable methods.

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traffic
 congestion is one of the most common problems that every large city is facing these days. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
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much
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any more
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