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I'm going to talk about a book I've read recently

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I'm going to talk about a book I've read recently. It's a top choice book to read when we are young called "Tuoi tre dang gia bao nhieu" which can be translated into VN as "How much is youth worth? ". The book was like the author's autobiography, a story about regretting when we are young. Rosie Nguyen who is the author of this book gives good advice for the young of VN. First of all, It also the most important thing is to take care of your healthy, when you are strong and own well healthy, you can do anything you want to. Secondly, I consider that It is so necessary which is reading a book. The young, we waste time for entertain and result is miss lots of knowledge in the world waiting us discover and the book is a thing like this. There are some messages in this book. I really love this book helped me realize the meaning of life.
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I've read recently. It's a top choice
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to read when we are
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Tuoi
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gia
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How much is youth worth?
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was like the author's autobiography, a story about regretting when we are
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young
. Rosie Nguyen who is the author of this
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gives
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advice for the
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of VN.
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thing is to take care of your healthy, when you are strong and
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own
well healthy, you can do anything you want to.
Secondly
, I consider that It is
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necessary which is reading a
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book
. The
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young
, we waste time for entertain and result is miss lots of knowledge in the world waiting us discover and the
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book
is a thing like this. There are
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some
messages in this
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. I
really
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me realize the meaning of life.
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IELTS essay I'm going to talk about a book I've read recently

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
164 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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