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One of the most crucial and indispensable decision in a student's life is to choose their perfect career. So parents should guide them in the right path to follow their dreams and passion instead of compelling them to choose a specific profession. I completely agree with the above statement. Firstly, I do agree that children shouldn't be pressurised because every youngster will have their own interests, dreams and passions. And also children nowadays are proactive and have high levels of maturity at an early age. So they must be given freedom to choose the path whichever they like. For instance, if we force them too much, it may lead to a stressful life and they would lack interest in doing work. Secondly, teenagers should be given proper guidance and motivation by their parents to achieve success. They should be given detailed information about various career paths which they are interested in and their future opportunities. So that they can opt for a right decision. For exampl

One of the most crucial and indispensable decision in a student's life is to choose their perfect career. So parents should guide them in the right path to follow their dreams and passion instead of compelling them to choose a specific profession. I completely agree with the above statement. Firstly, I do agree that children shouldn't be pressurised because every youngster will have their own interests, dreams and passions. And also children nowadays are proactive and have high levels of maturity at an early age. So they must be given freedom to choose the path whichever they like. For instance, if we force them too much, it may lead to a stressful life and they would lack interest in doing work. Secondly, teenagers should be given proper guidance and motivation by their parents to achieve success. They should be given detailed information about various career paths which they are interested in and their future opportunities. So that they can opt for a right decision. For exampl 3aY5m

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