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One of the longest train journeys of my life

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Human nature. What does it mean? Where does this term originate from? Generally speaking, there is a great deal of controversy over this term. It cannot be denied that the term human nature cannot be precisely expressed in words since there is not an official definition which would be describing this term. Nevertheless, it is imperative to have a notion of certain areas and issues of people’s lives concerning this term since they influence society to a significant extent. One of them is human’s reliance on society in general. Do people require someone’s presence or prefer living somewhere off the beaten track? Some people also mull over the question of whether or not human beings are genetically predisposed to put themselves first as certain people only liaise with their own allies if they can benefit from that themselves. In contrast, there might also be people who think that society has always been willing to help out others under any circumstances. As far as I am concerned, while it might be true that some people in society are reluctant to help out others when they are on their knees, I would not go so far as to say that this applies to everyone. However, it is vital to treat others how you would like to be treated. Some of these previously raised questions undoubtedly stem from philosophy as they are not based on proven facts but rather on controversy and discussions. Broadly speaking, the majority of materials with regard to this topic are philosophical and therefore, it is no surprise that several pundits and aficionados in other fields have written some papers from a different perspective as the term human nature is also interwoven with other fields such as politics and anthropology. All things considered, experts in other fields have extensively contributed to developing the meaning of the term human nature. Moreover, it is also interesting to observe how society is divided in terms of liaising with other
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Human
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nature
. What does it mean? Where does this
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term
originate from?
Generally
speaking,

there is a great deal of controversy over this term.

It cannot
be denied
that the
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term
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human
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nature
cannot be
precisely
expressed in words since

there is not an official definition which would be describing this
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term
.
Nevertheless
, it is

imperative to have a notion of certain areas and issues of
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people’s
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lives
concerning this term

since they influence
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society
to a significant extent. One of them is
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human’s
reliance on

society
in general
. Do
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people
require someone’s presence or prefer living somewhere off the

beaten
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track
?
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Some
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people
also
mull over
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the question of whether
or not
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human
beings are

genetically
predisposed to put themselves
first
as certain
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people
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only
liaise with their
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own


allies if they can benefit from that themselves.
In contrast
, there might
also
be
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people
who

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think
that
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society
has always been willing to
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help
out others under any circumstances. As far

as I
am concerned
, while it might be true that
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some
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people
in
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are reluctant to
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help
out

others when they are on their knees, I would not go
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so
far as to say that this
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applies to


everyone.
However
, it is vital to treat others how you would like to
be treated
.

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Some
of these previously raised questions
undoubtedly
stem from philosophy as they are not

based on proven facts
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but
rather
on controversy and discussions.
Broadly
speaking, the

majority of materials with regard to this topic are philosophical and
therefore
, it is no surprise

that several pundits and aficionados in
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other
fields have written
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some
papers from a
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different


perspective as the
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term
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human
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nature
is
also
interwoven with
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other
fields such as politics and

anthropology.

All things considered, experts in
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other
fields have
extensively
contributed to developing the

meaning of the
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term
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human
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nature
.
Moreover
, it is
also
interesting to observe how
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society
is divided
in terms of liaising with
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other
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IELTS essay One of the longest train journeys of my life

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
326 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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