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Many people believe that formal 'pen and paper' examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations?

Many people believe that formal 'pen and paper' examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations? Nb7b
It is assumed that paper-based exams are not the best way to measure people's ability and educational accomplishment. Although 'pen and paper' examinations have some drawbacks, they are appropriate for modern life's educational demands. There are several reasons why present examinations are decent for educational assessment. The first reason is paper-based exams are controlled and time-effective way to assess people's abilities and knowledge. Although it is difficult for some people to perform their best in such type of exams, paper-based exams are necessary when it comes to prevent cheating and plagiarism. When people are under such exam conditions, it is unlikely that they can copy others' work cheat in any way. Furthermore, in formal 'pen and paper' exams, many people can be assessed in short time. Despite the fact that students cannot often get feedback on their mistakes from exams, this type of exams are very time-saving for both students and examiners. Secondly, paper-based exams are the best method for comparing different regions' results nationally in order to improve the quality of education in whole country. If one region's exam results are much lower than others, the government can learn the causes why it is. Even more importantly, paper-based exams enable us assess students in a national-standardised way. This method ease the burden of comparing exam results nationally. In this way students are required to gain standardised same skills, know same knowledge. As a result, it is much straightforward for governments to be aware of quality of education in their country. To conclude, in spite of having some disadvantages, present paper-based examinations can meet the need of evaluating many people massively in time-effective way.
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that paper-based exams are not the best way to measure
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people
's ability and educational accomplishment. Although 'pen and paper' examinations have
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some
drawbacks, they are appropriate for modern life's educational demands. There are several reasons why present examinations are decent for educational assessment. The
first
reason is paper-based exams
are controlled
and time-effective way to assess
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people
's abilities and knowledge. Although it is difficult for
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some
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people
to perform their best in such type of exams, paper-based exams are necessary when it
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comes
to
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prevent
cheating and plagiarism. When
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people
are under such exam conditions, it is unlikely that they can copy others' work cheat in any way.
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people
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students
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get
feedback on their mistakes from exams, this type of exams are
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time-saving for both
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students
and examiners.
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different
regions'
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results
nationally
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improve
the quality of education in whole country. If one region's exam
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results
are much lower than others, the
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government
can learn the causes why it is. Even more
importantly
, paper-based exams enable us assess
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students
in a
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way. This method
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ease
the burden of comparing exam
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results
nationally
. In this way
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students
are required
to gain
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same
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skills
, know same knowledge. As a
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result
, it is much straightforward for
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governments
to be aware of quality of education in their country.
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,
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in spite of
having
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disadvantages, present paper-based examinations can
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meet
the need of evaluating
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people
massively
in time-effective way.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that formal 'pen and paper' examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations?

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