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One of the biggest problems facing the world today is growing enough food to feed the ever-expanding population. Genetically Modified foods are the best way to solve this issue. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the biggest problems facing the world today is growing enough food to feed the ever-expanding population. Genetically Modified foods are the best way to solve this issue. pLmWw
It is generally thought that feeding people increasing progressively is one of the most important issue in today's complex society. Some people claim the best solution is to grow Genetically Modified foods. Personally, I partially agree with this point of view for some reasons. There is no doubt true that as the population of the world goes up, the need for nutrition becomes on the rise. It can be argued that growing a wide range of plants could probably be sufficient to save world population in terms of nutriment. Of course, it makes sense at some point, however, in this regard we need numerous arable lands for this and it can trigger deforestation. Besides that, sowing the soil on a yearly basis causes lots of areas to degrade, and these areas should be left void. On the other hand, a more positive implication is to plant foods modified genetically. It is proved by many scientists that GM foods would possibly result in various diseases for people. For example, some chemicals used in these kinds of food may give rise to dangerous diseases for the heart. Nonetheless, if the government is forced to come to a decision to disallow genetically modified foods, in this case, farmers will be on the verge of being insufficient under existing conditions. It is because some foods are really in need of fertilisers and various types of chemicals. To conclude, it is generally claimed that genetically modified foods help the world population to survive the best, however, I am inclined to believe that we need arable lands to cultivate, as well as fertilisers, to enhance nutriments' quality. It is expected the governments will be prone to grow genetically modified foods in the future.
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thought
that feeding
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people
increasing
progressively
is one of the most
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important
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issue
in
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today
's complex society.
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Some
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people
claim the best solution is to grow
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Genetically
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Modified
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foods
.
Personally
, I
partially
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agree
with this point of view for
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some
reasons.

There is no doubt true that as the population of the world goes up, the
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need
for nutrition becomes on the rise. It can
be argued
that growing a wide range of plants could
probably
be sufficient to save world population in terms of nutriment.
Of course
, it
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makes
sense at
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some
point,
however
, in this regard we
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need
numerous arable lands for this and it can trigger deforestation.
Besides
that, sowing the soil on a yearly basis causes lots of areas to degrade, and these areas should be
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left
void.

On the other hand
, a more
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positive
implication is to plant
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foods
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modified
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genetically
. It
is proved
by
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many
scientists that GM
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foods
would
possibly
result in various diseases for
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people
.
For example
,
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some
chemicals
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used
in these kinds of
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food
may give rise to
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dangerous
diseases for the heart. Nonetheless, if the
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government
is forced
to
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come
to a decision to disallow
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genetically
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modified
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foods
,
in this case
, farmers will be on the verge of being insufficient under existing conditions. It is
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because
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some
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foods
are
really
in
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need
of
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fertilisers
and various types of chemicals.

To conclude
, it is
generally
claimed that
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genetically
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modified
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foods
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help
the world population to survive the best,
however
, I
am inclined
to believe that we
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need
arable lands to cultivate,
as well
as
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fertilisers
, to enhance nutriments' quality. It is
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expected
the
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governments
will be prone to grow
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genetically
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modified
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
in the future.
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IELTS essay One of the biggest problems facing the world today is growing enough food to feed the ever-expanding population. Genetically Modified foods are the best way to solve this issue.

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4 paragraphs
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6.0
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