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one day I usually have free time in the evening

one day I usually have free time in the evening B7P3a
one day I usually have free time in the evening, after I finish my homework. I love reading financial news because it gives me a lot of knowledge. sometimes I practice drawing. i like trying new color combinations. I think it helps me be more creative. on the weekend, I will play badminton. Playing sports helps me exercise and I feel more comfortable. besides, i will online Facebook to chat with my friends. Because of the pandemic, I couldn't see my friends, so we can only chat online. in addition, I also try to cook new dishes from time to time, but it's very rarely succeeds. That’s why I rare ly cook. That’s all the things I usually do in my free time
one
day I
usually
have free
time
in the evening, after I finish my homework. I
love
reading financial news
because
it gives me
a lot of
knowledge.
sometimes
I practice drawing.
i
like trying new color combinations. I
think
it
helps
me be more creative.
on
the weekend, I will play badminton. Playing sports
helps
me exercise and I feel more comfortable.
besides
,
i
will online Facebook to chat with my friends.
Because
of the pandemic, I couldn't
see
my friends,
so
we can
only
chat online.
in
addition, I
also
try to cook new dishes from
time
to
time
,
but
it's
very
rarely succeeds. That’s why I
rare ly
cook. That’s all the things I
usually
do in my free
time
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IELTS essay one day I usually have free time in the evening

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  American English
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122 words
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