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On this pandemic time right now, almost every schools in Indonesia are doing online school as their studying system. There’s many positive things we can took from online school that we never had before in offline school. For example, the schedule while doing online school is more flexible. We can negotiate with the teacher for the class schedule. If we still studying offline in school we can’t did that for free.

On this pandemic time right now, almost every schools in Indonesia are doing online school as their studying system. There’s many positive things we can took from online school that we never had before in offline school. For example, the schedule while doing online school is more flexible. We can negotiate with the teacher for the class schedule. If we still studying offline in school we can’t did that for free. eYyA
On this pandemic time right now, almost every schools in Indonesia are doing online school as their studying system. There’s many positive things we can took from online school that we never had before in offline school. For example, the schedule while doing online school is more flexible. We can negotiate with the teacher for the class schedule. If we still studying offline in school we can’t did that for free.
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IELTS essay On this pandemic time right now, almost every schools in Indonesia are doing online school as their studying system. There’s many positive things we can took from online school that we never had before in offline school. For example, the schedule while doing online school is more flexible. We can negotiate with the teacher for the class schedule. If we still studying offline in school we can’t did that for free.

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