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Some people believe that the predicaments they face in their life are part of their fate and they are destined to face such problems, however, others contend that people should rather work on these difficulties and improve their situation to lead a successful life. On one hand, it is easier for people to accept the hardships they face in their work or personal life rather than working on improving them as they have little control over them. For instance, a student suffering from autism would find it hard to understand social cues. For him to go into denial and not accept his limitations would no be fruitful and may even exacerbate his problems. It can be important to identify the problems which one has little or no control over. On the otherhand, it is often asserted that the only way to improve our lives is to battle with the shortcomings in one’s life. Although devising a solution for a problem may be hard, but eventually might lead to an improvement in one’s life. For instance, if a person who is facing a financial crisis, does not find ways to solve they problem and just accepts the problem the way it is, he may never get out of poverty and may not be able to contribute to society or lead a meaningful life. Similarly, doing an unsatisfactory job may affect the other aspects of one’s life like their personal relationships. Therefore, it is important to work on the problems one encounters for an overall better life. In the final analysis, although there are certain exceptions where accepting a bad situation may be more important, generally in my opinion, it is important that one does not accept their current situation.
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believe that the predicaments they face in their
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life
are part of their
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fate and
they
are destined
to face such
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problems
,
however
, others contend that
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people
should
rather
work on these difficulties and
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improve
their situation to lead a successful life.

On one hand, it is easier for
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people
to
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accept
the hardships they face in their work or personal
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life
rather
than working on improving them as they have
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little
control over them.
For instance
, a student suffering from autism would find it
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hard
to understand social cues. For him to go into denial and not
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accept
his limitations would
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no
be fruitful and may even exacerbate his
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problems
. It can be
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important
to identify the
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problems
which one has
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little
or no control over.

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otherhand
, it is
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often
asserted that the
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only
way to
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improve
our
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lives
is to battle with the shortcomings in one’s
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life
. Although devising a solution for a
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problem
may be
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hard
,
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eventually
might lead to an improvement in one’s
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life
.
For instance
, if a person who is facing a financial crisis, does not find ways to solve they
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problem
and
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accepts
the
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the way it is, he may never
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get
out of poverty and may not be able to contribute to society or lead a meaningful
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life
.
Similarly
, doing an unsatisfactory job may affect the other aspects of one’s
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life
like their personal relationships.
Therefore
, it is
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important
to work on the
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problems
one encounters for an
overall
better life.

In the final analysis, although there are certain exceptions where accepting a
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bad
situation may be more
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important
,
generally
in my opinion, it is
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that one does not
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accept
their
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current
situation.
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IELTS essay ome that it is to a situation as an to try improve job or situations.

Essay
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4 paragraphs
288 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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