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In the modern era, living cost has intensively increased and people are continuously under pressure to cut it.

In the modern era, living cost has intensively increased and people are continuously under pressure to cut it. XDm8O
In the modern era, living cost has intensively increased and people are continuously under pressure to cut it. When it comes to the finding best ways to save money, Opinions are various from one person to another person. However several experts have suggested three solutions including taking roommate, delaying purchasing new technology, and buying less expensive stufffood. Among these strategies, I think that the first perspective stands out as an important place; I will elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs. To begin with, taking a roommate saves money more than other choices. We all know, housing cost is the main part of living expenses that are increasing every year due to populationgrowth of urban. but it is no worrying place because these expenditures are fixed and will considerably decrease if many more people live together. while this issue often strengthen life quality. On the contrary, this is not true about other choices. for instance eating less nutritional foods in long time periods, pose a threat to people' immune system and to be susceptible for getting the illness. In addition, nowadays using new technology is extremely important because allows us to do quickly and precisely and update information. thrid solution will lead that decrease competitive edge and employable. apart away of spending less money on rental cost, sharing expenditure with roommate can influence other aspect of living expenses. the first and foremost of which house expenditures can be done without of reducing quality. for instance we can either buying a electronic device and use it with each other or eating good food. another noteworthy is that it can help to earn more money. when taking a roommate, house tasks will share and it allow us to spend a lot time on work and give more money. put in brief, according above mentioned it can be concluded that sharing expense with other people is the best way to reduce living cost because hiring cost will be reduced and other expense also do
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living
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has
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people
are
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cut
it. When it
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finding best
ways to save
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money
, Opinions are various from one person to another person.
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several experts have suggested three solutions including taking
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roommate
, delaying purchasing new technology, and buying less expensive
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stufffood
. Among these strategies, I
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first
perspective stands out as an
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place; I will elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs.

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begin
with, taking a
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roommate
saves
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money
more than
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other
choices. We all know, housing
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cost
is the main part of
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living
expenses that are increasing every year due to
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populationgrowth
of urban.
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but
it is no worrying place
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because
these expenditures are
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fixed
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considerably
decrease if
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many
more
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people
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live
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while
this issue
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often
strengthen life quality.
On the contrary
, this is not true about
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other
choices.
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for
instance eating less nutritional foods in long time periods, pose a threat to
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people
' immune system and to be susceptible for getting the illness.
In addition
, nowadays using new technology is
extremely
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important
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because
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allows
us to do
quickly
and
precisely
and update information.
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thrid
solution will lead that decrease competitive edge and employable.

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apart
away of spending less
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money
on rental
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cost
, sharing expenditure with
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roommate
can influence
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other
aspect of
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living
expenses.
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the
first
and foremost of which
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house
expenditures can
be done
without of reducing quality.
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for
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instance we
can either buying
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a
electronic device and
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use
it with each
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or eating
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good
food.
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another
noteworthy is that it can
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help
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.
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when
taking a
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roommate
,
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house
tasks will share and it
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allow
us to spend
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a lot time
on work and give more money.

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put
in brief
, according above mentioned it can
be concluded
that sharing
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expense
with
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other
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people
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is
the best way to
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reduce
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living
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cost
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hiring
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cost
will be
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reduced
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other
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IELTS essay In the modern era, living cost has intensively increased and people are continuously under pressure to cut it.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
331 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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