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o ochieve o bolonce befween lheir work ond lives, but few people ochieve it. who] ore the couses of this probtem? How lo overcome il

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An incredible amount of energy has been spent chasing the ideal work life balance, but most people fail to achieve it. This essay intends to discuss the possible reasons for this, and also suggest ways to overpower this problem. The first reason for the inability to achieve a work life balance is the technology of today. we are more reachable than ever in the past. Work has gone global, and competition has gone stiffer. The cell-phone has thinned the line between personal and professional lives. The second blame goes to the materialistic society of today. People want to avail all the luxuries of life, and in that quest they become workaholics and then that attitude becomes a way of life, because the desires go on increasing and increasing. Furthermore, people cannot achieve a work-life balance because the definition of a work-life balance is different for different people. People weave together their personal life with their professional life to get the best of life. What works for one person may not work for another. Making choices is what the balance between work and life is all about. There may be times when the choice between moving ahead with your career takes a back seat to your health or happiness at home. The priorities you identifo as important keep changing and that is why achieving a perfect work-life balance is difficult. The solutions are not simple. we must try to introspect and see what makes us happy and then set priorities in life. When we come home from work, we must learn to switch the office button off. Another key is adopting some flexibility. lt never works if we are too rigid with the goals we set for ourselves. Last but not least, there is a beautiful term, 'downshifting', which means we should learn when enough is enough and then we all begin to enjoy life in its true form. To sum up, work life balance is perceived in a different light by us all, and so achieving a perfect work life
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been spent
chasing the ideal
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life
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,
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but
most
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people
fail to

achieve it. This essay intends to discuss the possible reasons for this, and
also
suggest ways to overpower

this problem.

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first
reason for the inability to achieve a
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life
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balance
is the technology of
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today
.
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we
are more

reachable than ever in the past.
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Work
has gone global, and competition has
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gone


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stiffer
.

The

cell-phone

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has


thinned the line between personal and professional
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lives
. The second
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blame


goes to

the

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materialistic


society of
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today
.
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want to avail all the luxuries of
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life
, and in that quest they become workaholics and

then that attitude becomes a way of
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life
,
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because
the desires go on increasing and increasing.

Furthermore
,
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people
cannot achieve a work-life
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balance
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because
the definition of a work-life
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is

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for
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people
.
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weave together their personal
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life
with their professional
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life


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to
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get


the best of
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life
. What works for one person may not
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work
for another. Making choices is what the balance

between
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work
and
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life
is all about. There may be times when the choice between moving ahead with your

career takes a back seat to your health or happiness at home. The priorities you
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identifo
as
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important
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changing and
that is
why achieving a perfect work-life
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balance
is difficult.

The solutions are not simple.
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we
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must
try to introspect and
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see
what
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makes
us happy and then set

priorities in
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life
. When we
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come
home from
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work
, we
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must
learn to switch the office button off. Another

key is adopting
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flexibility.
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lt
never works if we are too rigid with the goals we set for ourselves. Last

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but
not least, there is a
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beautiful
term, 'downshifting', which means we should learn when
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enough
is

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enough
and then we all
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begin
to enjoy
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life
in its true form.

To sum up,
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work
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is perceived
in a
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different
light by us all, and
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so
achieving a perfect
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IELTS essay o ochieve o bolonce befween lheir work ond lives, but few people ochieve it. who] ore the couses of this probtem? How lo overcome il

Essay
  American English
13 paragraphs
339 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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