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Cyber crimes among youth in India

Cyber crimes among youth in India 6Lb68
We have been working with the police on understanding online safety. They are very prompt when it comes to reporting cases under Protection of Children from Sexual Offences (POCSO) Act, but there is no clarity when it comes to minors committing cybercrimes. Sections of the Information Technology (IT) Act are made for adults, hence for cybercrimes involving minors, courts use a combination of the Juvenile Justice (JJ) Act, the POCSO Act, and the IT Act. The POCSO Act is more relevant for online CSA cases as it is newer than other acts. Section 15 of POCSO criminalizes storing, publishing, sharing CSAM for commercial or individual purposes. Section 13 of POCSO criminalises use of a child or the involvement of a child through any medium like print, electronic, media, and internet. There needs to be well defined sacrosanct rules to protect children from committing or being vulnerable to cybercrimes.
We have been working with the police on understanding online safety. They are
very
prompt

when it
comes
to reporting cases under Protection of Children from Sexual
Offences
(
POCSO
)

Act,
but
there is no clarity when it
comes
to minors committing
cybercrimes
.

Sections of the Information Technology (IT)
Act
are made
for adults,
hence
for
cybercrimes


involving minors, courts
use
a combination of the Juvenile Justice (
JJ
)
Act
, the
POCSO
Act
, and

the IT Act.

The
POCSO
Act
is more relevant for online CSA cases as it is newer than other
acts
. Section 15

of
POCSO
criminalizes storing, publishing, sharing
CSAM
for commercial or individual

purposes. Section 13 of
POCSO
criminalises
use
of a child or the involvement of a child through

any medium like print, electronic, media, and internet.

There needs to be
well defined
sacrosanct
rules
to protect children from committing or being

vulnerable to
cybercrimes
.
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IELTS essay Cyber crimes among youth in India

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4 paragraphs
148 words
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