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Cybercrimes- Challenges faced by parents and children

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Parenting in the digital area has been the biggest challenge. We have realized that technology has hit us at jet speed and we cannot handle it. We don't understand it and we are fearful of it. On the other hand, children are over-enthusiastic and curious about the online world. Children also carry a tremendous burden of balancing the offline and online world. They are struggling academically and fighting the peer force to be online, to create content, and to be accepted. Our theory of change is based on the 5 pillar strategies for educating parents and children to build a holistic preventive approach: 1. Understand the cybercrimes committed by children and which children are more vulnerable. 2. Understand the psychological impacts of irresponsible online behavior and how it can affect your personality and behaviour? 3. Teach technical tips needed to handle devices: As basic as how to keep a Wi-Fi password to how to report content on social media platforms, and parental control. 4. Understand legal implications of online behaviour. When a minor commits a cybercrime, parents or the guardian will have to face the consequences as the SIM cards are given only to adults. 5. Learn how to report cybercrimes and seek help. The
Parenting in the digital area has been the biggest challenge. We have realized that technology has

hit us at jet
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speed and
we cannot handle it. We don't
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it and
we are fearful of it. On the

other hand,
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children
are over-enthusiastic and curious about the
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online
world.

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also
carry a tremendous burden of balancing the offline and
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online
world. They are

struggling
academically
and fighting the peer force to be
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online
, to create content, and to be

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accepted
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Our theory of
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is based
on the 5 pillar strategies for educating parents and
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children
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build a holistic preventive approach:

1.
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the
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cybercrimes
committed by
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children
and which
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are more

vulnerable.

2.
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Understand
the psychological impacts of irresponsible
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online
behavior and how it can

affect your personality and
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behaviour
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3. Teach technical tips needed to handle devices: As basic as how to
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keep
a Wi-Fi password

to how to report content on social media platforms, and parental control.

4.
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legal implications of
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online
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behaviour
. When a minor commits a cybercrime,

parents or the guardian will
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face the consequences as the SIM cards are
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5. Learn how to report
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IELTS essay Cybercrimes- Challenges faced by parents and children

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
204 words
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