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Numerous People believe that technology will improve people's lives than past

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The mellinium society's are believe their lives are more compatible and advanced compare to the past centuries, However the point of views are more singled with the details of the theme of the wished, The above mentioned statement are very common and is not recognized by all the citizens in the globe, This statement can be agreed up to some end, but it's not hundred present agreeably, to evaluate the wight of this matters we have to compares pros and cons of the lifestyle of the minimum society with the past centuries peoples.
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mellinium
society's are
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believe
their
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lives
are more compatible and advanced compare to the past centuries,
However
the point of views are more singled with the
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details
of the theme of the wished, The above mentioned statement are
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very
common and is not recognized by all the citizens in the globe, This statement can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
up to
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some
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end
,
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but
it's not
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hundred
present
agreeably
, to evaluate the wight of this matters we
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have to
The verb after "to" should be in the base form: "compare".
compares
pros and cons of the lifestyle of the minimum society with the past centuries peoples.

IELTS essay Numerous People believe that technology will improve people's lives than past

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