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Brain drains from northen Syria:

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The participants acknowledged that many highly educated people emigrated from Syria as a result of the war, as happened in Iraq and other countries where wars broke out, which led to a shortage of teaching staff at universities in northern Syria, and teaching university subjects by non-specialists. Which constituted a burden on the university teacher and students and created knowledge gaps for students.

The participants acknowledged that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
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highly
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 emigrated from Syria as a result
 of the war, as happened in Iraq and other countries where wars broke out, which led to a shortage of teaching staff at universities in northern Syria, and teaching university subjects by non-specialists. Which constituted a burden on the university teacher and students and created knowledge gaps for students. 

IELTS essay Brain drains from northen Syria:

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American English

1 paragraphs

63 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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