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Number of influenza cases reported from 1985 to 1995

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In 1985 the number of cases was at its least of 40. Then gradually it increased in the following year to be 45 then to 50 people in 1987. The number of people had decreased the next year to about 45 people. Then from 1988 to 1991, the number of people kept increasing reaching its peak in 1991 of 70 cases were reported. The following year there was a drop from 70 to 60 cases. In the following three years there was instability in the number of cases.
In 1985 the
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of cases was at its least of 40. Then
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it increased in the following
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to be 45 then to 50
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people
in 1987. The
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number
of
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people
had decreased the
next
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year
to about 45
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people
. Then from 1988 to 1991, the
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of
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people
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kept
increasing reaching its peak in 1991 of 70 cases
were reported
. The following
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there was a drop from 70 to 60 cases. In the following three years there was instability in the
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number
of cases.
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IELTS essay Number of influenza cases reported from 1985 to 1995

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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