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Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting the increasing demand. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting the increasing demand. Ylrm
In the present scenario, for meeting the continouse requirement of power, nuclear power is thought as the following step of the world for energy. In my opinion, nuclear power is not only effective for environment but also it is renewable energy source that can be used to revolutionise the world. However, its negative points can not be denied at any cost. Undoubtedly, to utilise such kind of energy, has a tremendous positive outcomes for the whole Global. The most compiling one is that it has powerful environmental benefit. When this energy is produced at higher or larger level it does not emit any sort of gas that is harmful for atmosphere. For example, in 2013, Chinese nuclear plants have avoided 50 million tons of Co2 emission that would result if the electricity were produced by fossil fuels. So, in this way where this energy is effective for climate it also proves lucrative for the reduction of global warming. Secondly, its renewable nature is beneficial for the growing demand of world of energy that may not be satisfied with other sources of energy such as Oil, Petroleum, wind energy and Solar energy.  On the other side, it is difficult or impossible to avoid its dangerous outcomes in a specific circumstances. One Of of its huge threats is that this power arises from radiation which can penetrate easily in human body. Consequently, it can damage in biological cells and their by initiate cancer. Moreover, it is also used risk associated with it either it happens by human error or by any other mesque its result can be catastrophic. For example, a nuclear plant in the experienced due to its operator's error. This resulted in enormous spread of nuclear Leak which is still radioactive after decades. In Conclusion, although numerous advantages are associated with this technology still with great production it be boon for meeting rising demand of world.
In the present scenario, for meeting the
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world
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energy
. In my opinion, nuclear
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power
is not
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only
effective for environment
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also
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energy
source that can be
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, its
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negative
points can not
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at any cost.
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, to
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utilise
such kind of
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energy
, has a tremendous
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positive
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outcomes
for the whole Global. The most compiling one is that it has powerful environmental benefit. When this
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energy
is produced
at higher or larger level it does not emit any sort of gas
that is
harmful for atmosphere.
For example
, in 2013, Chinese nuclear plants have avoided 50 million tons of Co2 emission that would result if the electricity
were produced
by fossil fuels.
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So
, in this way where this
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energy
is effective for climate it
also
proves lucrative for the reduction of global warming.
Secondly
, its renewable nature is beneficial for the growing demand of
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world
of
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energy
that may not
be satisfied
with other sources of
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energy
such as Oil, Petroleum, wind
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energy
and Solar
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energy
.  On the other side, it is difficult or impossible to avoid its
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dangerous
outcomes in a specific circumstances. One
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Of of
its huge threats is that this
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power
arises from radiation which can penetrate
easily
in human body.
Consequently
, it can damage in biological cells and their by initiate cancer.
Moreover
, it is
also
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used
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risk
associated with it either it happens by human error or by any other
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its result can be catastrophic.
For example
, a nuclear plant in the experienced due to its operator's error. This resulted in enormous spread of nuclear Leak which is
still
radioactive after decades.
In Conclusion
, although numerous advantages
are associated
with this technology
still
with great production it
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be
boon for meeting rising demand of
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world
.
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IELTS essay Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting the increasing demand.

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