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Nowdays youngster are less polite and less resprctful than in past. What are the reason for this? What can be done to solve this issue

Nowdays youngster are less polite and less resprctful than in past. What are the reason for this? What can be done to solve this issue Lw6rp
Youngster play a important role in society's development and to protect their traditional value. In recent way, young adults are not polite and not respect other, when compare to the past. There are two major teasons, such as luck of parental guidence and morr media explosure. in this eassy discuss the solution of these issue. To begin with, many people fail in guding their children in a proper way. Both the father and mother have the prime responsibility yo teach how to behave with other and how to respect to other. Morever, if the family member pay less attention to their child, it leads to a serious disaster in their children growth. Thus impact attitude change and may behave impolite in public area. In addition, the second reason is media. The media keeps giving priority to negavtive vidio and news that influence children in negative ways. For instance, more vidios and contains are being played repeatadly to ensure their television rating and profit ignoring the impact on society. As a result, many teenager ignore everything and act like a superhero. The first solution of above problem is a parents to teach morals and make teenager understand the value of politness. Also the parent allow their children to learn tarditional approches by their grandparents who teaches well. The second solution is to avoid negative media influence among people. For example goverment should emforce the law on news and vidio that affects youngsters. Therfore, the society become a polite amd youngster respect everyone. In sum up, in this situation parent's role is very important to educating young adults for their right behaviour toward other. Also the media's negative news can be controlled by in safety rules.
Youngster
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role in society's development and to protect their traditional value. In recent way, young adults are not polite and not respect
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other
, when compare to the past. There are two major
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teasons
, such as luck of parental
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guidence
and
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morr
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media
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explosure
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in
this
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eassy
discuss the solution of these issue. To
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with,
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many
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people
fail in
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guding
their
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children
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in a proper way
. Both the father and mother have the prime responsibility
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yo
teach how to behave with
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other
and how to respect to
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other
.
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Morever
, if the family member pay less attention to their child, it leads to a serious disaster in their
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children
growth.
Thus
impact attitude
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change
and may behave impolite in public area.
In addition
, the second reason is
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media
. The
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media
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keeps
giving priority to
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negavtive
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vidio
and news that influence
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children
in
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negative
ways.
For instance
, more
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vidios
and contains are
being played
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repeatadly
to ensure their television rating and profit ignoring the impact on society.
As a result
,
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many
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teenager
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ignore
everything and act like a superhero. The
first
solution of above problem is
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a parents
to teach morals and
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make
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teenager
understand the value of
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politness
.
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Also
the parent
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allow
their
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children
to learn
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tarditional
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approches
by their grandparents who
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teaches
well. The second solution is to avoid
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negative
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media
influence among
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people
.
For example
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goverment
should
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emforce
the law on news and
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vidio
that affects youngsters.
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Therfore
, the society become a polite
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youngster respect everyone. In sum up, in this situation parent's role is
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very
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important
to educating young adults for their right
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behaviour
toward
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other
.
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Also
the media's
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negative
news can
be controlled
by in safety
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rules
.
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IELTS essay Nowdays youngster are less polite and less resprctful than in past. What are the reason for this? What can be done to solve this issue

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  American English
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