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foreign travel is limited due to the advent of covid

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foreign travel is limited due to the advent of covid but it is not serving the true purpose of reducing the spread of cases while living a better life without total lockdown forever. tourism gives a lot of income and business to many countries and brings many benefits with it. travel restrictions are meant to limit imported covid cases but fail to do so. strictly restricting outsiders reduces income through tourism and business as well us reduces need to get vaccinated quickly. the manner of executing these restrictions is quite absurd as some allow only few countries and restrict others based on various paradoxical factors. it looks like many developed countries seems to care about expediency rather than morals.
foreign
travel
is limited
due to the advent of
covid
but
it is not serving the true purpose of reducing the spread of cases while living a better life without total lockdown forever.
tourism
gives
a lot of
income and business to
many
countries and brings
many
benefits with it. travel restrictions
are meant
to limit imported
covid
cases
but
fail to do
so
.
strictly
restricting outsiders
reduces
income through tourism and business
as well
us
reduces
need to
get
vaccinated
quickly
.
the
manner of executing these restrictions is quite absurd as
some
allow
only
few countries and restrict others based on various paradoxical factors.
it
looks like
many
developed countries
seems to care about expediency
rather
than morals.
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IELTS essay foreign travel is limited due to the advent of covid

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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