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Nowdays, our societies are becoming more and more technology savvy, as a result of this notion many people beliefs that computer should be considered in the classroom curriculum in place of direct teaching methodology. But there are few risks associated with our dependence on computers. I would like to talk about on its positive and negative impacts

Nowdays, our societies are becoming more and more technology savvy, as a result of this notion many people beliefs that computer should be considered in the classroom curriculum in place of direct teaching methodology. But there are few risks associated with our dependence on computers. I would like to talk about on its positive and negative impacts 265XA

First and foremost if computers are introduced at school level then it will give opportunities to children learn their lessons in a faster manner. Young adults are more inclined towards the gadgets which will results in increasing their involvement in studies. In India the concept of smart classes was started very early by Delhi Government as they were the first to encash that if education is being taught creatively then it would had a longer impact on students. Furthermore as

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