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Nowdays a lot of information about medical conditions and illnesses is freely available on the internet. Is this a good thing or a bad thing for most people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge and experience

It is undeniable true that there are ample of information available on internet. In today's scenario a lot of free data present regarding health conditions and illness. This essay will discuss it has detrimental effect on many individuals and provides answers in further paragraphs. There are numerous reasons that why it is bad thing for people. The first and predominant reason is about adverse effect on body. This is to say that because of availability of free data, people want to see and know about their illness. If individuals use the given methods, they might have chances of increases their diseases. What is more, they implement methods on body and find out that wrong treatments. As a result, many people has increased that problems rather than solve. For Instance, as per survey of one hospital indicated that many people had severe problems because they tried their ownself to cure. Owing to it they have serious consequences. Henceforth, using online information may harmful for your health. In addition to it, majority the information available on internet are not fact. In other words, without having knowledge regarding that particular subject they just put for their own purpose. Although some of information are true, they must written under strict supervision. Moreover, they never Consult doctors about before due to it has wrong effect on human healths. For example, youtube, blogging and many others resources from where people are earning money where they provide information on it. As a consequence, for their own mean they post anything without concerning about other side. Hence, consulting the free data has the negative results on health. In conclusion, in modern era a lot of resources related to sickness and medical problems presents on internet which considered as a negative consequences on human because it has side effects on many persons and they majority not detailed data.
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information
available on internet. In
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today
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a lot of
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data
present regarding health conditions and illness. This essay will discuss it has detrimental
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effect
on
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many
individuals and provides answers in
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There are numerous reasons that why it is
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bad
thing for
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people
. The
first
and predominant reason is about adverse
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effect
on body. This is to say that
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because
of availability of free
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data
,
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people
want to
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see
and know about their illness. If individuals
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use
the
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given
methods, they might have chances of increases their diseases.
What is more
, they implement methods on body and find out that
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wrong
treatments.
As a result
,
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many
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people
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has
increased that problems
rather
than solve.
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, as per survey of one hospital indicated that
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many
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people
had severe problems
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because
they tried their
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ownself
to cure. Owing to
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it
they have serious consequences. Henceforth, using online
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information
may harmful for your health.

In addition
to it, majority the
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information
available on internet are not fact.
In other words
, without having knowledge regarding that particular subject they
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just
put for their
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own
purpose. Although
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some
of
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are true, they
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under strict supervision.
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wrong
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healths
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youtube
, blogging and
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others resources from where
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people
are earning money where they provide
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information
on it. As a consequence, for their
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own
mean they post anything without concerning about other side.
Hence
, consulting the free
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data
has the
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negative
results on health.

In conclusion
, in modern era
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a lot of
resources related to sickness and medical problems presents on internet which considered as a
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negative
consequences on human
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because
it has side effects on
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many
persons and they majority not detailed
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data
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IELTS essay Nowdays a lot of information about medical conditions and illnesses is freely available on the internet. Is this a good thing or a bad thing for most people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge and experience

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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