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Nowadays younger genaration are paying more attention to their physical appearance

Nowadays younger genaration are paying more attention to their physical appearance E7lnb

Traditionally in Southeast Asian countries, the younger generation is judged as talented based on material wealth rather than physical appearance. However, I firmly believe that young people are becoming increasingly concerned with their appearance. Having good looks will give you more confidence, more job opportunities, and increase the ability to build relationships. And this essay will address the reason for my views as follows

Traditionally
 in Southeast Asian countries, the younger generation is judged
 as talented based on material wealth rather
 than physical appearance. However
, I firmly
 believe that young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are becoming increasingly
 concerned with their appearance. Having This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 looks will give you more confidence, more job opportunities, and increase the ability to build relationships. And this essay will address the reason for my views as Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfollows.follows!follows?follows:follows,follows;
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