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DESCRIBED YOURSELF (LEAST 500 WORDS)

DESCRIBED YOURSELF (LEAST 500 WORDS) aQqW9
Hi, My name is Phuong Anh, my full name is Tran Thi Phuong Anh and you can call me Frank. I am 15 years old and I was born and grow up in Ha Noi, Viet Nam. I am a student who lives with my family in Ha Noi. All my friends are from the city too. Each person has different hobbies, and doing different things gives them joy. Reading is something that gives me comfort and helps me relax. I reading books prepare me to go to bed At first, it was unfocused, but then I started reading more and more. The habit is something that has helped me learn a lot. After a hectic day, it helps to relax and broken my stress. Another thing that helps me relax is playing a game. I started playing games when I was in my free time. The first thing that I want to learn is cooking. The number of things I can make in the kitchen is limited. However, while making those things, I realize the happiness and satisfaction are get from cooking. One of the cuisines I want to learn correctly in Japanese. It’s a cuisine that I have started loving, and knowing how to cook dishes in the kitchen will make me happy. Two more things that I want to learn are skateboarding and driving a motorbike. I love doing adventurous things because they make give me a feeling of thrill. I want to do professional courses in both adventure activities. Almost everyone is kind at least one sport. The one competition that I am good at is badminton. In my free time, I always played badminton with my family and my friend. Over the years, the way I played badminton improved, and while learning the game, I discovered other lessons as well. One of the important lessons I’ve learned is how to play in a team. I have always been energetic. While many people feel awkward and weird, making me friends, I have no problems with making new friends. I can talk to everyone quickly and know them. And everyone who meets me will also see that I am confident and have good communication skills, I also see myself. However, I also have a weakness as well as need to improve which is concentration. I am easily distracted by things that I do not like and I do not want to continue the problems related to them. I think my difference from others is that I have found my strengths and weaknesses and at the same time developed my strengths and overcome my weaknesses. With the weakness of distraction, I have overcome by trying to read books to improve this weakness. As for my strengths, I have applied to two clubs with the positions of finance - foreign affairs and media ambassador, and I believe I can fulfill my duties well. Also from this, my parents come from me. Also changed their mind about me, I have matured and stronger than they thought and this is what I have proven to my family. This is all about me.
Hi, My name is
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Phuong
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Anh
, my full name is Tran
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Thi
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Phuong
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Anh
and you can call me Frank. I am 15 years
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old and
I
was born
and grow up in Ha
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Noi
,
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Viet
Nam. I am a student who
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lives
with my family in Ha
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Noi
. All my
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friends
are from the city too. Each person
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has
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different
hobbies, and doing
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different
things gives them joy. Reading is something that gives me comfort and
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helps
me relax.
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I reading
books prepare me to go to bed At
first
, it
was unfocused
,
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but
then I
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started
reading more and more. The habit is something that
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has
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helped
me
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learn
a lot. After a hectic day, it
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helps
to relax and broken my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
. Another thing that
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helps
me relax is playing a game. I
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started
playing games when I was in my free time. The
first
thing that I
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want
to
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learn
is cooking. The number of things I can
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make
in the kitchen
is limited
.
However
, while making those things, I realize the happiness and satisfaction are
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get
from cooking. One of the cuisines I
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want
to
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learn
correctly
in Japanese. It’s a cuisine that I have
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started
loving, and knowing how to cook dishes in the kitchen will
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make
me happy. Two more things that I
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want
to
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learn
are skateboarding and driving a motorbike. I
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love
doing adventurous things
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because
they
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make
give me a feeling of thrill. I
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want
to do professional courses in both adventure activities. Almost everyone is kind at least one sport. The one competition that I am
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good
at is badminton. In my free time, I always played badminton with my family and my
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friend
. Over the years, the way I played badminton
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improved
, and while learning the game, I discovered other lessons
as well
. One of the
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important
lessons I’ve learned is how to play in a team. I have always been energetic. While
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many
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people
feel awkward and weird, making me
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friends
, I have no problems with making new
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friends
. I can talk to everyone
quickly
and
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know
them. And everyone who meets me will
also
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see
that I am confident and have
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good
communication
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skills
, I
also
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see
myself.
However
, I
also
have a
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weakness
as well
as need to
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improve
which is concentration. I am
easily
distracted by things that I do not like and I do not
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want
to continue the problems related to them. I
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think
my difference from others is that I have found my strengths and
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weaknesses
and at the same time developed my strengths and overcome my
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weaknesses
. With the
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weakness
of distraction, I have overcome by trying to read books to
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improve
this
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weakness
. As for my strengths, I have applied to two clubs with the positions of finance
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-
foreign affairs and media ambassador, and I believe I can fulfill my duties well.
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Also
from this, my parents
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come
from me.
Also
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changed
their mind about me, I have matured and stronger than they
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thought
and this is what I have proven to my family. This is all about me.
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IELTS essay DESCRIBED YOURSELF (LEAST 500 WORDS)

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
521 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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