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I believe there are many good things of living an good life. He said it would have to do it at home but he is still on his own but I will let him know that I have a good time and he has to a bit to do a job and I will let you know if I need it to do anything for the next Yy I’m going back to the house to go with you guys and then I’ll come back and pick it out for dinner tonight or we will try and go back and I can go over and see if you can do that and
I believe there are
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many
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good
things of living
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
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good
life. He said it would
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have to
do it at home
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but
he is
still
on his
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own
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but
I will
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let
him know that I have a
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good
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
time and
he
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has to
a bit to do a job and I will
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let
you know if I need it to do anything for the
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
next


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Yy
I’m going back to the
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house
to
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go with
you guys and then I’ll
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come
back and pick it out for dinner
Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
tonight or
we will
"Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.
try and
go back and I can go over and
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see
if you can do that and
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Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
110 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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