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Nowadays, young people communicate with friends and family

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These days, youngsters are having conversations with peers and relatives frequently using social media platforms, instead of different approaches of discussion like speaking on the phone or meeting outside. In this essay, I will express my opinion why it could create negative impact than good and provide final point in conclusion. Even though the networking site provides a simple solution to get connected with others, it also establishes the boundaries with could lead to loneliness and depression. Sometimes using these types of platforms requires carrying smartphones and other electronic devices always with them. That could make them depend on it and less resilient. On top of that, not having a physical connection allows people to hide their true feelings behind the wall of a digital environment.
These days, youngsters are having conversations with peers and relatives
frequently
using social media platforms,
instead
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
approaches of discussion like speaking on the phone or meeting outside. In this essay, I will express my opinion why it could create
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impact than
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and provide final point
in conclusion
.

Even though
the networking site provides a simple solution to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
connected with others, it
also
establishes the boundaries with could lead to loneliness and depression.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Sometimes
using these types of platforms requires carrying smartphones and other electronic devices always with them. That could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them depend on it and less resilient.
On top of that
, not having a physical connection
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allows
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people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hide
their true feelings behind the wall of a digital environment.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, young people communicate with friends and family

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
126 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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