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nowadays work from home method has started.discuss both view

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trom
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benefit to do that
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, there is
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can save their time
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reduce
the environment Pollution.
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Some
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like to do
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of home
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but
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work
at
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because of they
have no comfortable atmosphere where they do their
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work
as same as they do not feel
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good
while working cit home.
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that much more
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plan to spend time with their team member. They can
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from home has advantage is that employees do their
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wherever they want at their home such as drawing
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on. other
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have introvert mature
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set their home environment
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as possible
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achieve their goal.
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employers
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com save their light bill, Peon
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ase
doing job in
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. This modern.

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gemexcation
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IELTS essay nowadays work from home method has started. discuss both view

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
208 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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