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Nowadays we have a lot of technologies and they are developing every year, advances in technology have made our life much easier and helpful.

Nowadays we have a lot of technologies and they are developing every year, advances in technology have made our life much easier and helpful. MMy0a
Nowadays we have a lot of technologies and they are developing every year, advances in technology have made our life much easier and helpful. This essay will discuss some jobs which is been replaced because of computers and what kind of problems will be in this situation To begin with, now it is convenient for people to communicate with each other and there no problems as ts was before the particular reason for this circumstance when technology was not developed people had to send a message by post workers and wait a long time nevertheless it will not be difficult because of the advances of technology people can communicate when they want with each other regardless of place or someone. Besides, now you can not only communicate but also get any information, study lessons without leaving anywhere or have fun. This actively demonstrates that advances in technology replaced post workers and made it easier for people's lives. On the other hand, there are several reasons for the problems of developing technology. Nowadays most people prefer to use virtual communicating rather than in real life. For example, because of the pandemic, all students switched from paper-based to computer delivered which can be effect badly one people self-development in real life. To add to it they haven’t got any physical activities that affect people health To sum up, everything that has been started so far I believe that technology has simplified the world by making life easier for everyone. Also, there are some drawbacks to influencing the development of human in the real world
Nowadays we have
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technologies and
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have made our
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life
much easier and helpful. This essay will discuss
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some
jobs which
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of computers and what kind of problems will be in this situation

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it is convenient for
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to communicate with each other and there no problems as ts was
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the particular reason for this circumstance when
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technology
was not developed
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people
had to
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send
a message by post workers and wait a long time
nevertheless
it will not be difficult
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because
of the advances of
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technology
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people
can communicate when they want with each other regardless of place or someone.
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you can not
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communicate
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get
any information, study lessons without leaving anywhere or have fun. This
actively
demonstrates that advances in
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technology
replaced post workers and made it easier for
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people
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technology
. Nowadays most
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people
prefer to
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virtual communicating
rather
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life
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,
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of the pandemic, all students switched from paper-based to computer delivered which can be effect
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one
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people
self-development in real
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life
. To
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it
they haven’t
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any physical activities that affect
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people
health

To sum up, everything that has been
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started
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so
far I believe that
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technology
has simplified the world by making
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life
easier for everyone.
Also
, there are
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some
drawbacks to influencing the development of human in the real world
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IELTS essay Nowadays we have a lot of technologies and they are developing every year, advances in technology have made our life much easier and helpful.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
261 words
5.5
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