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Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? koNW
The world and specially asian countries are experiencing a major problem nowadays which is high amount of garbage production. A number of countries like India, Pakistan, Sri Lanka, Thailand are producing tons of non degradable waste which includes plastic and other environmental toxic things. There are three main reasons behind this. First is gaps in laws and policies. Though the working governments are taking a lot of necessary steps to reduce the wastage, on the contrary there are huge gaps in laws as well. As an example, usage of non degradable polythene is still not fully banned in countries like India, Pakistan and Sri Lanka. There are certain parts in these countries where the usage is banned on the contrary there are huge gaps in laws in smaller states. Second reason is Education and lack of resources. In many undeveloped countries, people are not aware of the consequences of using non biodegradable resources such as polythene etc. Things like sanitary pads and condoms are thrown in garbage. A used sanitary pads take 15 years to decompose and since people are not aware of this fact, they just throw these things out on roads etc. Third and major reason behind this is that many people think that how can I change the system and why should I spend few extra bucks to buy biodegradable products. I believe that both governments and citizens should work together. People should start acting on government policies and should completely avoid using non biodegradable products. Though in metro cities, many working governments have installed a waste management system that collects the waste generated and converts it to something useful that does not harm the mother earth. On the same like, governments should quickly plan to extend this to smaller cities. There should be a ban on factories and industries that are responsible for generating the waste. In conclusion, I would like to quote a famous saying of Mahatma Gandhi "Be the change you wish to see". Every person is responsible for bringing this change and everyone should work towards it.
The world and
specially
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asian
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countries
are experiencing a major problem nowadays which is high amount of garbage production. A number of
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countries
like India, Pakistan, Sri Lanka, Thailand are producing tons of
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non degradable
waste which includes plastic and other environmental toxic things.

There are three main reasons behind this.
First
is gaps in laws and policies. Though the working
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governments
are taking
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a lot of
necessary steps to
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reduce
the wastage,
on the contrary
there are huge gaps in laws
as well
. As an example, usage of
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non degradable
polythene is
still
not
fully
banned in
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countries
like India, Pakistan and Sri Lanka. There are certain parts in these
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countries
where the usage
is banned
on the contrary
there are huge gaps in laws in smaller states. Second reason is Education and lack of resources. In
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many
undeveloped
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countries
,
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people
are not aware of the consequences of using
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non biodegradable
resources such as polythene etc. Things like sanitary pads and condoms
are thrown
in garbage. A
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used
sanitary pads take 15 years to decompose and since
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people
are not aware of this fact, they
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just
throw these things out on roads etc. Third and major reason behind this is that
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many
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people
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think
that how can I
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change
the system and why should I spend few extra bucks to
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buy
biodegradable products.

I believe that both
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governments
and citizens should work together.
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People
should
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start
acting on
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government
policies and should completely avoid using
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non biodegradable
products. Though in metro cities,
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many
working
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governments
have installed a waste management system that collects the waste generated and converts it to something useful that does not harm the mother earth. On the same
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like
,
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governments
should
quickly
plan to extend this to smaller cities. There should be a ban on factories and industries that are responsible for generating the waste.

In conclusion
, I would like to quote a
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famous
saying of Mahatma Gandhi
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Be the
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change
you wish to
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see
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. Every person is responsible for bringing this
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change
and everyone should work towards it.
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IELTS essay : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
344 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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