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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words

Nowadays's environmental problems increasing day by day. Pollution and wastage is also part of an environmental hazard. Government and individual should take some steps to decrease these problems. I am going to discuss some reasons and solutions in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, People are producing wastage in a high amount of quantity. So, the major reason behind this increasing population. For example, Nowadays some people are educated so they control birth planning. But, most of the people who live in backward areas are having more than two children. So, if you have a big family then the usage of the product is more and simply rubbish more. Secondly, Industries are enhancing day by day so it produces a high amount of wastage and this is also the reason of pollution. In this paragraph, I discuss some solutions which help us to reduce the quantity of rubbish. Firstly, It's the government's responsibility to decrease rubbish with the help of some strict rules. They banning polythene bags in a country. If someone caught with these bags then they give strict punishment as well as a fine. After this, they educate people to small families. In some countries, Government does this with the helping of this slang" If we are two we have two" So this quote is effective. Most people are following this. Besides this, Government takes some steps on industrialization who produce more wastage on earth. According to my point of view, Government and the people both are responsible for rubbish and they need to take some steps which controls the wastage.
Nowadays's environmental problems increasing day by day. Pollution and
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wastage
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part of an environmental hazard.
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Government
and individual should take
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some
steps to decrease these problems. I am going to discuss
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reasons and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.

To
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are producing
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wastage
in a high amount of quantity.
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So
, the major reason behind this increasing population.
For example
, Nowadays
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some
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people
are educated
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so
they control birth planning.
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But
, most of the
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people
who
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live
in backward areas are having more than two children.
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So
, if you have a
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big
family then the usage of the product is more and
simply
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rubbish
more.
Secondly
, Industries are enhancing day by day
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so
it produces a high amount of
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wastage
and this is
also
the reason of pollution.

In this paragraph, I discuss
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some
solutions which
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help
us to
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reduce
the quantity of
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rubbish
.
Firstly
, It's the
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government
's responsibility to decrease
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rubbish
with the
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help
of
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some
strict
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Did you mean "They're banning", "They are banning", or "They were banning"?
They banning
polythene bags in a country. If someone caught with these bags then they give strict punishment
as well
as a fine. After this, they educate
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people
to
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small
families. In
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some
countries,
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Government
does this with the helping of this slang
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
If we are two we have two
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"
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So
this quote is effective. Most
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people
are following this.
Besides
this,
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Government
takes
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some
steps on industrialization who produce more
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wastage
on earth.

According to my point of view,
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Government
and the
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people
both are responsible for
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rubbish and
they need to take
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some
steps which controls the
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wastage
.

IELTS essay : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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