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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

In these fast moving world, as we are developing we tend to produce more and more waste material. There are many reasons that the rubbish is produced more than to be reduced. In these essay, I will discuss about why it is happening and measures that government should take to control or reduce them. To begin with, development has an adverse effect and one form can be the amount of garbage produced. The availability of things easily and dumping away things frequently instead of reusing it and not in proper manner. The world produces alot of waste in different manners in form of plastic packing, electronic devices and many more. The main thing is that the waste is utered anywhere and proper guidelines are not followed by the people. The most common wastes are water bottles, plastic wrappers, handy electric devices which people throw away in a blink of eye as the need of that thing is over. Furthermore, government should take major steps towards these issue like setting-up special garbage dumping yards and putting dust-bins in every corner of cities. Running campaign and educating people to reuse things which can be used again, telling them to dump waste at particular place from where it can be collected easily and recycled again for further use. Bounty and reward schemes for proper dumping and reusing of it. To exemplify, A city in europe had set plastic bottles collection vending machine which gives a ticket of metro of 10 cents per bottle to reduce bottle waste, which turned out to be effective. In conclusion, I would like to say that we should make it our own responsibity to reduce waste and reuse as many things as we can to contorl waste and make environment more clean and green.
In these
fast
moving world, as we are developing we tend to produce more and more
waste
material. There are
many
reasons that the rubbish
is produced
more than to be
reduced
. In these essay, I will
discuss about why
it is happening and measures that
government
should take to control or
reduce
them.

To
begin
with, development has an adverse effect and one form can be the amount of garbage produced. The availability of things
easily
and dumping away things
frequently
instead
of reusing it and not in proper manner. The world produces
alot
of
waste
in
different
manners in form of plastic packing, electronic devices and
many
more. The main thing is that the
waste
is
utered
anywhere and proper guidelines are not followed by the
people
. The most common
wastes
are water
bottles
, plastic wrappers, handy electric devices which
people
throw away in a blink of eye as the need of that thing is over.

Furthermore
,
government
should take major steps towards these issue like setting-up special garbage dumping yards and putting dust-bins in every corner of cities. Running campaign and educating
people
to reuse things which can be
used
again, telling them to dump
waste
at particular place from where it can
be collected
easily
and recycled again for
further
use
. Bounty and reward schemes for proper dumping and reusing of it. To exemplify, A city in
europe
had set plastic
bottles
collection vending machine which gives a ticket of metro of 10 cents per
bottle
to
reduce
bottle
waste
, which turned out to be effective.

In conclusion
, I would like to say that we should
make
it our
own
responsibity
to
reduce
waste
and reuse as
many
things as we can to
contorl
waste
and
make
environment more clean and green.
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
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