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Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? D5xW
Trash production and management is a current hot topic in the world. We all are facing all types of trash in our daily routine which is really harmful to a healthy life. The essay will discuss that producing more trash and what are actions should government take to reduce it. Further explaining this essay that increasing trash in our society is happening due to the fact of overpopulation and mismanagement. Every day more than 30% of people are migrating to Karachi from other areas of Pakistan for their business. The government of Sindh is not taking action to control the population. Moreover, there's not a good infrastructure in our city. People are not aware of the cleanliness of society and they are not concerned about it due to the fact they don't care what is happening around the world. On the other hand, If government take an action on this matter then our city can be maintained well. Managing trash and collection of it from every area in the morning and dump it into the specific area or the government can produce oil from this trash easily with the help of other countries. I have seen examples in other countries, the concept of smart trashbin is also increasing. The government of Pakistan should also create this change. In the conclusion of this essay, rubbish is the biggest issue all over the world but we can make other useful things from it. In this way, trash can be controlled.
Trash
production and management is a
current
hot topic in the world. We all are facing all types of
trash
in our daily routine which is
really
harmful to a healthy life. The essay will discuss that producing more
trash
and what are actions should
government
take to
reduce
it.

Further
explaining this essay that increasing
trash
in our society is happening due to the fact of overpopulation and mismanagement. Every day more than 30% of
people
are migrating to Karachi from
other
areas of Pakistan for their business. The
government
of
Sindh
is not taking action to control the population.
Moreover
, there's not a
good
infrastructure in our city.
People
are not aware of the cleanliness of
society and
they are not concerned about it due to the fact they don't care what is happening around the world.

On the
other
hand, If
government
take an action on this matter then our city can
be maintained
well. Managing
trash
and collection of it from every area in the morning and dump it into the specific area or the
government
can produce oil from this
trash
easily
with the
help
of
other
countries. I have
seen
examples in
other
countries, the concept of smart
trashbin
is
also
increasing. The
government
of Pakistan should
also
create this
change
.

In the conclusion of this essay, rubbish is the biggest issue all over the world
but
we can
make
other
useful things from it. In this way,
trash
can
be controlled
.
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IELTS essay : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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