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If you ask me whether ''spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money or not? '', I would absolutely say that I disagree with this statement, because all these celebrities are important in every society all over the world. I know It is up to me to decide, but frankly speaking I have got some reasons for my choose. These years, parties plays a very important role in our life, they makes people feel enthusiastic to what are going through this events. In addition, duing these times the witnesses can share their cultures of weddings to other people around them and you can find all kind of people their whether children, young or old people. Also, all these things makes people feel happly and glad, they can eat together and speak to each other. On the other hand, there are some imprortant points we should consider and take into account. On of them is, we shouldn't spend too much money for the parties, but we should make a very simple event. Wasting money doesn't make the family fell confident and maybe they got alone from the bank to this this party, so this will leads them to live in unpleassent life. Before I conclude I should say that I disagree with wasting a money in doing kind of parties, and I prefer to do a simple party.
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, birthday
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and other celebrations is
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or not? '', I would
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because
all these celebrities are
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important
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but
frankly
speaking I have
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reasons for my choose.

These years,
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plays a
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important
role in our life, they
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makes
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feel enthusiastic to what are going through
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this
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events
.
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duing
these times the witnesses can share their cultures of weddings to other
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people
around them and you can find all kind of
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people
their whether children, young or
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old
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people
.
Also
, all these things
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people
feel
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and glad, they can eat together and speak to each other.

On the other hand
, there are
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imprortant
points we should consider and take into account. On of them is, we shouldn't spend too much
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money
for the
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parties
,
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but
we should
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make
a
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very
simple
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event
. Wasting
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money
doesn't
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make
the family fell confident and maybe they
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got
alone from the bank to
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this this
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party
,
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this will leads them to
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in
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unpleassent
life.

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Before
I conclude I should say that I disagree with wasting a
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money
in doing kind of
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parties
, and I prefer to do a simple
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party
.
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IELTS essay IELTS Academic Samples IELTS Academic Samplesg

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
237 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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