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Nowadays uniforms are required at Universities. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays uniforms are required at Universities. 7a6b3

Majority of people state that uniform should be compulsory for students at Universities and the discipline can be controlled in this way. I totally agree with this statement. Furthermore, I can add that uniforms suit youngsters, they differ from other people in community and a student who wears suit and tie looks more intelligent. What is more is that uniform is not so expensive, so one can buy it and this saves money. One of the greatest and foremost plus points of wearing uniform is equality among young people and protect them from differentiation. However, there is another mode of the approaches to this issue. Some young people think only about wearing in fashion, not about his or her studies, but also how to earn more money for clothes and they will be busy both of study and work and feel always tired themselves. To sum up, I believe that if students wear uniforms at Universities it would bring benefits not only themselves, but also to their families.

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