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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development? v.26

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development? v. 26
Technology has been a key to several developments in strengthening and weakening relationships. Nowadays, People convey their messages to each other through different modes such as Facebook, Whatsapp and Gmail. In this essay we shall discuss both the positive and negative perspectives of advancement in technology that has affected relationships. These days the connections have become very superficial. Friendships are formed very quickly. People are falling in and out of love. In general, the association that they form are temporary in nature. We humans are generally spending more time over the internet rather than doing some productive work. For example, a few of them spend huge amount of time asking their online friends to comment on the post uploaded. A very vividly fake world is created. Finally, this supports the negative development part of the statement. However, the best part of mechanization is the ability of humans to form connections quickly. Another interesting relationship formed over the internet would be through LinkedIn. Certain beings actually give career related advices and help a few persons in referring for jobs. Furthermore, social boost and confidence is at an all time high through LinkedIn. Google is another platform where we can express their views with each other. On the other hand, this para supports the positive growth. To conclude, the technology has been the greatest invention of mankind. The positive outlook outweighs the negatives. If handled well, this would be the best gift to the universe.
Technology has been a key to several developments in strengthening and weakening relationships. Nowadays,
People
convey their messages to each other through
different
modes such as Facebook,
Whatsapp
and Gmail. In this essay we shall discuss both the
positive
and
negative
perspectives of advancement in technology that has
affected
relationships.

These days the connections have become
very
superficial. Friendships
are formed
very
quickly
.
People
are falling in and out of
love
.
In general
, the association that they form are temporary in nature. We humans are
generally
spending more time over the internet
rather
than doing
some
productive work.
For example
, a few of them spend huge amount of time asking their online friends to comment on the post uploaded. A
very
vividly
fake world
is created
.
Finally
, this supports the
negative
development part of the statement.

However
, the best part of mechanization is the ability of humans to form connections
quickly
. Another interesting relationship formed over the internet would be through LinkedIn. Certain beings actually give career related advices and
help
a few persons in referring for jobs.
Furthermore
, social boost and confidence is at an
all time
high through LinkedIn. Google is another platform where we can express their views with each other.
On the other hand
, this para supports the
positive
growth.

To conclude
, the technology has been the greatest invention of mankind. The
positive
outlook outweighs the negatives. If handled well, this would be the best gift to the universe.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development? v. 26

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