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nowadays, the trend of eating ready-made food is increasing. Is readymade food beneficial or not?

nowadays, the trend of eating ready-made food is increasing. Is readymade food beneficial or not? 0AE51
Issues related to readymade food are frequently discussed these days. Growing concerns are becoming heated question among people that whether it is beneficial or not, which will be discussed in this dissertation before reaching at any conclusion. As fas as the matter is concerned, some people consider readymade food advantageous for them because it saves their time. As we are living in a fast paced era, everyone is running a rat race to earn a pool of money which disables them to get some time for cooking. Here, readymade food works as savior. This type of food is mostly being consumed by students and employees who live far away from their family and do not have anyone to help them to prepare food. So, it becomes an intricate task for them to do all tasks singlehandedly. As every matter has two aspects, another aspect of this matter deals with its opposite side. Some multitude are not in the favour of eating packaged or frozen food because they opine that this type of food is deleterious for health. I also second this opinion as this type of food contains plenty of chemicals and preservatives to increase its shelf time but these chemicals put detrimental impact on human body and makes our body prone to many ailments. Apart from this, the nutritional value of readymade food is also lower than that of fresh food which compels masses to take additional supplements which further have side effects on body. After cogitating on a great deal of thoughts and discussion, the conclusion to be drawn here is that eating packaged food is like opening a Pandora's box unleashing a torrent of potential evils with a little seed of goodwill and hope.
Issues related to
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food
are
frequently
discussed these days. Growing concerns are becoming heated question among
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people
that whether it is beneficial or not, which will
be discussed
in this dissertation
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before
reaching at any conclusion.

As
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as the matter
is concerned
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some
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people
consider
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food
advantageous for them
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because
it saves their time. As we are living in a
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fast
paced era, everyone is running a rat race to earn a pool of money which disables them to
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get
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some
time for cooking. Here,
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readymade
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food
works as savior. This type of
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food
is
mostly
being consumed
by students and employees who
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live
far away from their family and do not have anyone to
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help
them to prepare
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food
.
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So
, it becomes an intricate task for them to do all tasks
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singlehandedly
.

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Some
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of eating packaged or frozen
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food
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because
they opine that this type of
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food
is deleterious for health. I
also
second this opinion as this type of
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food
contains
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plenty
of chemicals and preservatives to increase its shelf time
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but
these chemicals put detrimental impact on human body and
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makes
our body prone to
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many
ailments. Apart from this, the nutritional value of
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readymade
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food
is
also
lower than that of fresh
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food
which compels masses to take additional supplements which
further
have side effects on body.

After cogitating on a great deal of thoughts and discussion, the conclusion to
be drawn
here is that
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eating packaged
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food
is like opening a Pandora's box unleashing a torrent of potential evils with a
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little
seed of goodwill and hope.
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IELTS essay nowadays, the trend of eating ready-made food is increasing. Is readymade food beneficial or not?

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