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Nowadays, the crime rate is increasing with high propagation.

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Nowadays, the crime rate is increasing with high propagation. Prison is an accurate solution for crime issue in major countries. But few citizens believe that providing a better education rather than prison is an effective solution for unsocial work. This essay will explain why education is the better option for reducing crime. To starts with, there are plenty of positive aspects of education, which declined the rate of crime. First and foremost, the main reason for the crime is poverty or unworthiness, which will solve by providing education, because that generates job or work opportunity. Ultimately, the problem of crime and poverty will reduce. For example, Pakistan has the highest ratio of crime because the government is failing to empower work or job to their peoples. Furthermore, education helps to earn money as well as develop the better human beings, who are knowning which activity is good or bad for their country. And, stop doing that work which harms their nation. Fear of prison is temporary, but the understanding of the situation is long-lasting, which came from the education. For example, In Japan, the education ratio is the highest among the other countries, therefore the crime rate is the lowest. To conclude, education is the best option for solving the crime problem, because that helps to remove the main reason of crime as well as developed human mind for becoming a better human beings, who are never thinking to do unsocial work, which hurts the nation and society.
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rate is increasing with high propagation. Prison is an accurate solution for
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crime
issue in major countries.
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few citizens believe that providing a
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better
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education
rather
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. This essay will
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why
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education
is the
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option for reducing crime.

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of
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aspects of
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, which declined the rate of
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.
First
and foremost, the main reason for the
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crime
is poverty or unworthiness, which will solve by providing
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education
,
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because
that generates job or
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work
opportunity.
Ultimately
, the problem of
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crime
and poverty will
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reduce
.
For example
, Pakistan has the highest ratio of
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crime
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because
the
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government
is failing to empower
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work
or job to their peoples.

Furthermore
,
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education
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helps
to earn money
as well
as develop the
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better
human beings, who are
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which activity is
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for their country. And,
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stop
doing that
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work
which harms their nation. Fear of prison is temporary,
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but
the understanding of the situation is long-lasting, which came from the
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education
.
For example
, In Japan, the
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education
ratio is the highest among the other countries,
therefore
the
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crime
rate is the lowest.

To conclude
,
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education
is the best option for solving the
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crime
problem,
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because
that
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helps
to remove the main reason of
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crime
as well
as developed human mind for becoming a
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better
human beings, who are never thinking to do unsocial
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work
, which hurts the nation and society.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, the crime rate is increasing with high propagation.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
248 words
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