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Nowadays, technology is advancing rapidly, as well as our trandportation system. The masses would have to spend half of their life time, traveling for either work or other activities, therefore, public seems indispensable, and increasing its functions are another new topic.

Nowadays, technology is advancing rapidly, as well as our trandportation system. The masses would have to spend half of their life time, traveling for either work or other activities, therefore, public seems indispensable, and increasing its functions are another new topic. j5WoM
Nowadays, technology is advancing rapidly, as well as our trandportation system. The masses would have to spend half of their life time, traveling for either work or other activities, therefore, public seems indispensable, and increasing its functions are another new topic. Building a new railway lines can benift people who lives far away from the urban, because it could make the transport of goods or people more efficient. For instance, I have a friend who lives in the remote city, the place she’s living has only a tiny bus station, which comes three times every day. It was extremely difficult for me to meet her, nonetheless, two years after, the local government set up a new train line at her city, and now I can visit her more easily. However, some people are tend to think that it is more important to strength the current public transport, it may due to those people don’t have the demands to commuting in far distance, thus if the excisting transport are increased in it’s quaility, they will be more pleasent. In my opinion, improving the transport system rather than install new railway lines, that would be a massive lost. If we merely enhance them, then that won’t be any advantages to people who lives in other cities, they still to spend a lots of time on commuting, as well as the deliveries of the cargos, people would have to wait longer to receive their packages. But none of these circumstances will happen if railways lines expend. The length of time waste on the transportation would highly decrease, and the masses are more likely to get to their work place in time. Even though the existing transport system maybe not as good as other countries, yet shorten the time on transport can boost the economy of a country, the profit of the society will highten as well, overall, it can be the best choice to the country.
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trandportation
system. The masses would
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, traveling for either work or other activities,
therefore
, public seems indispensable, and increasing its functions are another
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new
topic.

Building a
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new
railway
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lines
can
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benift
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people
who
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lives
far away from the urban,
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it could
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make
the
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transport
of
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goods
or
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people
more efficient.
For instance
, I have a friend who
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lives
in the remote city, the place she’s living has
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only
a tiny bus station, which
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comes
three
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times
every day. It was
extremely
difficult for me to
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meet
her, nonetheless, two years after, the local
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government
set up a
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new
train
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line
at her city, and
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now
I can visit her more
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.

However
,
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important
to strength the
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public
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transport
, it may due to those
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people
don’t have the demands to commuting in far distance,
thus
if the
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excisting
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transport
are increased
in it’s
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quaility
, they will be more
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pleasent
. In my opinion, improving the
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transport
system
rather
than install
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new
railway
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lines
, that would be a massive lost. If we
merely
enhance them, then that won’t be any advantages to
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people
who
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lives
in other cities, they
still
to spend
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of
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time
on commuting,
as well
as the deliveries of the cargos,
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people
would
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have to
wait longer to receive their packages.
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But
none of these circumstances will happen if railways
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lines
expend.

The length of
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time
waste on the transportation would
highly
decrease, and the masses are more likely to
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get
to their work place in
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time
.
Even though
the existing
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transport
system maybe not as
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good
as other countries,
yet
shorten the
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time
on
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transport
can boost the economy of a country, the profit of the society will
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highten
as well
,
overall
, it can be the best choice to the country.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, technology is advancing rapidly, as well as our trandportation system. The masses would have to spend half of their life time, traveling for either work or other activities, therefore, public seems indispensable, and increasing its functions are another new topic.

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