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As the English language becomes more widespread, some speakers of other languages fear that English loanwords are gradually replacing perfectly adequate native words. To what extent do you believe that people should seek to protect the ‘purity’ of their language from the influence of English?

As the English language becomes more widespread, some speakers of other languages fear that English loanwords are gradually replacing perfectly adequate native words. VQGEA
In this modern epoch, some language are fading away and some are endangered with mininal number of people speaking their language in the world of four dominated language like English. However, English has made it’s way through worldwide but also now into different languages which has threatened some proper native words. Due to the english loanword replacing them. Indeed, I wholeheartedly concur that protection from manipulation of english is essential step to save the purity of a native language. This following paragraph will shed some lights on the reason for protection against replacement of english words. First of all, the primary reason is that english loanwords taking over native words would led to loss of distinctive of a particular language which passed on to next generation over the years. Consequently, it hinders the originality and value of a language which makes new generation less likely to opt of their mothertounge to speak but rather communicate in English. Hence, it needs a protection from the influence of English through government and people for intense german people who are to be known for agronat nature in respect of their native language as they speak and write in german only. Because without protecting a language, there will be not adequate platform for it to thrive and sustain over the ages with globalzation in hand. Furthermore, english loanwords endanger certain words and its meaning owning to every native words have its importance in a sentence as it clearly supports the meaning of a sentence. Whilst, english loanword alters the meaning of a sentence in native language and it makes complex as a language. Nevertheless, english loanwords can get wider scope of communication since to gets more vocabularies to articulate expression, emotion and thoughts. Moreover, it gives a easy base to shift from native language to english because sometimes not accepting some phases and words from english then some crowd may find hard to learn english and pronunciat certain words in english like most of the chinese people who do not speak r or l in their native but in english is important consonants to write and speak. All in all, protection of certain endanger languages can make a tremendous change to bring back and avoid present words to vanish from the native language where it belongs to be there. Thus, english loadwords should be only allowed to speak when it is necessary.
In this modern epoch,
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some
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language
are fading away and
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some
are endangered
with
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mininal
number of
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people
speaking their
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language
in the world of four dominated
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language
like English.
However
, English has made
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it’s
way through worldwide
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but
also
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now
into
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different
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languages
which has threatened
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some
proper
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native
words. Due to the
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english
loanword replacing them.
Indeed
, I
wholeheartedly
concur that
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protection
from manipulation of
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english
is essential step to save the purity of a
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native
language.

This following paragraph will shed
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some
lights on the reason for
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protection
against replacement of
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english
words.
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First of all
, the primary reason is that
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english
loanwords taking over
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native
words would
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led
to loss of distinctive of a particular
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language
which passed on to
next
generation over the years.
Consequently
, it hinders the originality and value of a
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language
which
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makes
new generation less likely to opt of their
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mothertounge
to
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speak
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but
rather
communicate in English.

Hence
, it needs a
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protection
from the influence of English through
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government
and
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people
for intense
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german
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people
who are to
be known
for
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agronat
nature in respect of their
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native
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language
as they
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speak
and write in
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german
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only
.
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Because
without protecting a
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language
, there will be not adequate platform for it to thrive and sustain over the ages with
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globalzation
in hand.
Furthermore
,
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english
loanwords endanger certain words and its meaning owning to every
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native
words have its importance in a sentence as it
clearly
supports the meaning of a sentence. Whilst,
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english
loanword alters the meaning of a sentence in
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native
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language
and it
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makes
complex as a language.

Nevertheless
,
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english
loanwords can
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get
wider scope of communication since to
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gets
more vocabularies to articulate expression, emotion and thoughts.
Moreover
, it gives
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a
easy base to shift from
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native
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language
to
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english
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because
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sometimes
not accepting
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some
phases and words from
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english
then
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some
crowd may find
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hard
to learn
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english
and
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pronunciat
certain words in
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english
like most of the
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chinese
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people
who do not
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speak
r or l in their
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native
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but
in
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english
is
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important
consonants to write and speak.

All in all,
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protection
of certain endanger
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languages
can
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make
a tremendous
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change
to bring back and avoid present words to vanish from the
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native
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language
where it belongs to be there.
Thus
,
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english
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loadwords
should be
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only
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allowed
to
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speak
when it is necessary.
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IELTS essay As the English language becomes more widespread, some speakers of other languages fear that English loanwords are gradually replacing perfectly adequate native words.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
398 words
5.5
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