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Nowadays students prefer to go abroad for higher studies. Is it negative and positive development.

Nowadays students prefer to go abroad for higher studies. Is it negative and positive development. 0Mpa5
Most of the students are prefer to go abroad for their higher education. This is fruitful for them in the future, however, it is good to stay at their own country because it can be create issues in that country through live there and diverse culture. I believe that native country provides best education to their citizens but foreign countries offer more than this which i will discuss in the forthcoming paragraphs. To begin with, there are numerous postive impacts of styding at university of international nations. First and foremost, they provide practical education to their students as well as theory with no burden which assitance them to focus on their education. This practical studies are extremely beneficial for them to sharp their mind and easy to understand. Additionally, this enhance the job opportunities among them to concentrate on their career and become capable to do work in groups. This built the leadship quality among them, also, tackle every situation wisely. International companies make them more confident and better change to work with them. Further reinforcing my perspective, these oppportunities support them to earn at high level along with their interests. Through this, students can fulfill their requirements and please their family which makes them supportive and reponsible to do something for close once. Moreover, it is a great change for students to know about the multiculture and traditions. By this, they do more respect to all culture and try to adapt it in a positive way. For example, many students like to go Canada for their further education where students come from many other countries and diverse culture. Thus, this built the unity among the students and brotherhood among them. To summerise, although students should not leave their culture and country but for big opportunity they should go for it to archieve a great success. It is solely possible with hardwork and good intentions.
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education
. This is fruitful for them in the future,
however
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good
to stay at their
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own
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country
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because
it can be
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create
issues in that
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country
through
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live
there and diverse
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culture
. I believe that native
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country
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provides best
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education
to their citizens
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but
foreign
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countries
offer more than this which
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i
will discuss in the forthcoming paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, there are numerous
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postive
impacts of
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styding
at university of international nations.
First
and foremost, they provide practical
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education
to their
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students
as well
as theory with no burden which
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assitance
them to focus on their
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education
. This practical studies are
extremely
beneficial for them to sharp their mind and easy to understand.
Additionally
,
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this enhance
the job opportunities among them to concentrate on their career and become capable to do work in groups. This built the
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leadship
quality among them,
also
, tackle every situation
wisely
. International
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companies
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make
them more confident and better
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change
to work with them.

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reinforcing my perspective, these
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oppportunities
support them to earn at high level along with their interests. Through this,
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students
can fulfill their requirements and
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please
their family which
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makes
them supportive and
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reponsible
to do something for close once.
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, it is a great
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change
for
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students
to know about the
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multiculture
and traditions. By this, they do more respect to all
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culture
and try to adapt it in a
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positive
way.
For example
,
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many
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students
like to go Canada for their
further
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education
where
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students
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come
from
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many
other
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countries
and diverse
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culture
.
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, this built the unity among the
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students
and brotherhood among them.

To
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, although
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students
should not
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culture
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country
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but
for
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big
opportunity they should go for it to
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archieve
a great success. It is
solely
possible with
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hardwork
and
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good
intentions.
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IELTS essay Nowadays students prefer to go abroad for higher studies. Is it negative and positive development.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
315 words
5.5
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