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Nowadays some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using the computer Do you agree or disagree v.1

Nowadays some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using the computer v. 1
Reading has always been an essential source of knowledge whether they are online or offline. Nowadays, E-Books are trending at a fast pace compared to paper books. Though online reading clearly outweigh the traditional method of book reading, but it also has some drawbacks. The primary reason for any individual to choose an online book is due to its accessibility. With the access to the internet, people are able to find any novel of their interest from any part of the world. With lightening speed procurement at a click away, the future of e-books seems indispensable. The secondary reason is that they also reduce the printing cost and readers cannot worry about loosing papers in between the books. Furthermore, it doesn't require a physical space at home or at an office, the enormous amount of data can be stored in a miniscule electronic device, which will be easy to carry anywhere. Nevertheless, not all is well with e-books, there must be a continuous source of power supply for reading online. A scientific research proves that viewing the LCD screens for a stretch of 15 minutes will make the eyes feeble. The probability of people exhausted in watching online, is far more compared to reading the paper books. Moreover, the data stored on the memory cards or in electronic devices has the risk of the data getting erased due to various reasons. To conclude, though the traditional method of reading paper books has its own place in the readers' heart, the trending e-books clearly supersedes with the integration of advance technology and ease of use and availability.
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fast
pace compared to paper
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online
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reading
clearly
outweigh the traditional method of
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book
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reading
,
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some
drawbacks.

The primary reason for any individual to choose an
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online
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book
is due to its accessibility. With the access to the internet,
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people
are able to find any novel of their interest from any part of the world. With lightening speed procurement at a click away, the future of e-books seems indispensable. The secondary reason is that they
also
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reduce
the printing cost and readers cannot worry about loosing papers in between the
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books
.
Furthermore
, it doesn't require a physical space at home or at an office, the enormous amount of data can
be stored
in a
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miniscule
electronic device, which will be easy to carry anywhere.

Nevertheless
, not all is well with e-books, there
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must
be a continuous source of power supply for
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reading
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online
. A scientific research proves that viewing the LCD screens for a stretch of 15 minutes will
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make
the eyes feeble. The probability of
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people
exhausted in watching
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online
, is far more compared to
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reading
the paper
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books
.
Moreover
, the data stored on the memory cards or in electronic devices has the
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risk
of the data getting erased due to various reasons.

To conclude
, though the traditional method of
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reading
paper
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books
has its
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own
place in the readers' heart, the trending e-books
clearly
supersedes with the integration of advance technology and
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ease
of
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use
and availability.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using the computer v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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