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Nowadays several students prefer to study at university in a foreign country.

Nowadays several students prefer to study at university in a foreign country. aqLnw
To this day and age numerous students desire and want to study abroad. Some students may have several complications in terms of living there, such as language barrier and nacism. This essay will consider difficulties in abroad and will purpose possible ways to solve this problem. First and foremost complication which student likely may face, is a language barrier. Considering that everyone wants study in foreign country, however not all individuals does not want learn their language. Hence they may have a language barrier which will make difficulties in communication between scholars. Second problem is nacism, it means that individuals may have a claims about nation of undergraduates from other country. In other words their citizens may hate other nations, and this one may lead to mockery and beating students. Second thing that will consider here is a ways to solve aforementioned complications. Therefore possible method to solve obstacle in terms of language barrier, the university should find mentor for their foreign undergraduate who will facilitate them with regard to communication between other students. Further there problem is a nacism, to solve this this type of problem educational institution also should toil for students worldview. To be precise, administration should work with students, and conduct lectures them that human is a human despite to their nation, language, appearance. Moreover that ways will help for foreign scholars. In conclusion, unfortunately most undergraduates in a big probability they will contact with this and other problems. Consequently to avoid this obstacles is almost impossible, as result to this day in world exists several million people, and it mean that at the moment exists million opinion, worldview, thoughts.
To this day and age numerous
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students
desire and want to study abroad.
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Some
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students
may have several complications in terms of living there, such as
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language
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barrier
and
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nacism
. This essay will consider difficulties in abroad and will purpose possible ways to
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solve
this problem.

First
and foremost complication which
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student
likely may face, is a
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language
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barrier
. Considering that everyone wants study in foreign country,
however
not all individuals does not
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want learn
their
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language
.
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they may have a
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language
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barrier
which will
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make
difficulties in communication between scholars. Second
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problem
is
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nacism
, it means that individuals may have
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a claims
about nation of undergraduates from
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other
country. In
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words their citizens may hate
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nations, and this one may lead to mockery and beating students.

Second thing that will consider
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aforementioned complications.
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possible method to
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obstacle in terms of
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language
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barrier
, the university should find mentor for their foreign undergraduate who will facilitate them with regard to communication between
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other
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students
.
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there
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is a
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nacism
, to
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educational institution
also
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students
worldview. To be precise, administration should work with
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students
, and conduct lectures them that human is a human despite to their nation,
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language
, appearance.
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Moreover
that ways will
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help
for foreign scholars.

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, unfortunately most undergraduates in a
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probability they will contact with this and
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.
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to avoid
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obstacles is almost impossible, as result to this day in world exists several million
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, and it
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opinion, worldview, thoughts.
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IELTS essay Nowadays several students prefer to study at university in a foreign country.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
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