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Nowadays, pollution is increasing, there are many reason. for it use of plastic products and plastic bags has increased which cannot be recycled which create pollution in the environment what steps people and government should take to reduce it give reason and example for your answer.

Nowadays, pollution is increasing, there are many reason. for it use of plastic products and plastic bags has increased which cannot be recycled which create pollution in the environment what steps people and government should take to reduce it give reason and example for your answer. yqAr
World is suffering from many global issues and pollution is one of the part of all of them. In this present scenario, pollution is rising there are multiple of reason for it like plastic items has inclined and it is adversity to reuse which lead to pollution in the nature. what is the solution ought to folks and authorities take to combat this woe. This essay will provide some solution of behind this issue in the Significantly serious steps needed to take to sooth the issues and that is administrator should Ban the use of plastic item because it is very adverserely to the living thing. In other words, whenever people buy any plastic products which is non-reuseable and after that items laying down on the streets and roads in which animals: cow, dog, and cat eat that items and suffer from several serious disease so, it should be restricted by the regulatory bodies. In addition, masses can start to use cloth bag which is made by clothes in which indirectly it will get benefit to the country as well as individuals. for instance, In New zealand 80% of citizen has been started to use cloth bag. thus, a country unemployment ratio will curtail and crime rate also because to make a cotton bag need lots of workers in that case it will be helpful to the labours as well as ultimately nature. Moreover, These days, number of people have the private vehicles to travel. To explicate, government should encourage to the public to start to use and travel by public transport like bus and Metro trains. As a result, it will deteriorate to use commercial vehicle and the rate of pollution will automatically reduce. To epitome, in Australia Government providing the magnificent facility of public transport to the citizen in which the pollution ratio has been declined by 60%. In conclusion, although using the plastic products have some Paramount in some cases, how much a person can eradicate to use the plastic items: poly bag, toy, and bottles that much it will give benefit to the nature because “an ounce prevention a worth Pound of core ”.
World is suffering from
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many
global issues and
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pollution
is one of the part of all of them. In this present scenario,
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pollution
is rising there are multiple of reason for it like
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plastic
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items
has inclined and it is adversity to reuse which lead to
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pollution
in the nature.
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what
is the solution ought to folks and authorities take to combat this woe. This essay will provide
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some
solution of behind this issue in
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the


Significantly
serious steps needed to take to sooth the issues and
that is
administrator should Ban the
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use
of
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plastic
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item
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because
it is
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very
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adverserely
to the living thing.
In other words
, whenever
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people
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buy
any
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plastic
products which is
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non-reuseable
and after that
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items
laying down on the streets and roads in which animals: cow, dog, and cat eat that
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items
and suffer from several serious disease
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so
, it should
be restricted
by the regulatory bodies.
In addition
, masses can
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start
to
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use
cloth
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bag
which
is made
by clothes in which
indirectly
it will
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get
benefit to the country
as well
as individuals.
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instance, In
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New zealand
80% of citizen has been
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started
to
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use
cloth
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bag
.
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thus
, a country unemployment ratio will curtail and crime rate
also
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because
to
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make
a cotton
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bag
need lots of workers
in that case
it will be helpful to the
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labours
as well
as
ultimately
nature.

Moreover
, These days, number of
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people
have the private vehicles to travel. To explicate,
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government
should encourage to the public to
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start
to
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use
and travel by public transport like bus and Metro trains.
As a result
, it will deteriorate to
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use
commercial vehicle and the rate of
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pollution
will
automatically
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reduce
. To epitome, in Australia
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Government
providing the magnificent facility of public transport to the citizen in which the
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pollution
ratio has
been declined
by 60%.

In conclusion
, although using the
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plastic
products have
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some
Paramount in
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some
cases, how much a person can eradicate to
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use
the
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plastic
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items
:
poly
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bag
, toy, and bottles that much it will give benefit to the nature
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because
“an ounce prevention a worth Pound of core ”.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, pollution is increasing, there are many reason. for it use of plastic products and plastic bags has increased which cannot be recycled which create pollution in the environment what steps people and government should take to reduce it give reason and example for your answer.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
358 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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