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Some people think that Government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy food.do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that Government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy food. Ax21
Some are of state that the authorities should lavy high taxes on such as unhealthy food this would people towards divert on healthy food. I confidentley, vote against the viewpoint. My preference is justified future. The foremost argument to my stand is that high taxes are directly affect the middle and poor people. If they prefer eat outside of food at that time they not easily afford it. Rich family will not face it they will consume it. Moreover, authorities can make healthy food through policies and rules thay people benefit for less food make home. Furthermore, nowadays people life is busiest due to they not spend time with their friends and relatives that sometimes thay prefer go outside with friend and relatives for dinner, unfortunately reason of high rate so they make cook whole day for them. so they create big impact on middle family. On the contrary, some may claim that taxes on unhealthy food is immediately effect. if the unhealthy food is become expensive people shall immediately divert to the healthy food they can best remides to situation effective and helpful. To conclude, imposing higher taxes are bring some changes to fastest pattern change; however, this type of changes directly affect to middle and poor families because they not capable to pay high taxes and people are busyiest due to working.
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are of state that the authorities should
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lavy
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high
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taxes
on such as unhealthy
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food
this would
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people
towards divert on healthy
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food
. I
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confidentley
, vote against the viewpoint. My preference
is justified
future. The foremost argument to my stand is that
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high
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taxes
are
directly
affect the middle and poor
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people
.
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If
they prefer eat outside of
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food
at that time they not
easily
afford it. Rich family will not face it they will consume it.
Moreover
, authorities can
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make
healthy
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food
through policies and
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rules
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thay
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people
benefit for less
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food
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make
home.
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, nowadays
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people
life is
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busiest
due to they not spend time with their friends and relatives that
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sometimes
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thay
prefer go outside with friend and relatives for dinner, unfortunately reason of
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high
rate
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they
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make
cook whole day for them.
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they create
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impact on middle family.
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,
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some
may claim that
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taxes
on unhealthy
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food
is immediately effect.
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if
the unhealthy
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food
is become
expensive
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people
shall immediately divert to the healthy
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food
they can best
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remides
to situation effective and helpful.
To conclude
, imposing higher
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taxes
are
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bring
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some
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changes
to
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pattern
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change
;
however
, this type of
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changes
directly
affect to middle and poor families
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because
they not capable to pay
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high
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taxes
and
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people
are
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busyiest
due to working.
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IELTS essay Some people think that Government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy food.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
224 words
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