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Nowadays Pollution is increasing day by day. What are the causes and solutions of this problem?

Nowadays Pollution is increasing day by day. What are the causes and solutions of this problem? 8gmXV
In this modren era everyone know clearly about polution is being increased day by day. There are some reasons why it does happen as well as well solutions to solve this problem without face any problem. To begin with, first and foremost reason is that people prefer to use too much private vehicles. Moreover, it can be seen clearly that in every city through traffic congestion. Last but not least is that we cut the trees rapidly. in addition to, everyone know about the value of trees like it protects our an environment. For instance, In Delhi when people drived everyday to use this type of vehicle Delhi has made extremely polluted place in India On the other hand, There are some solutions to solve this problem. Firstly, the government should be made strict rules against private vehicles. Firstly. it is should be limited in public places so that it can be reduced. Apart from, we don't cut the tress because without tress our life is impossible in order to live. Furthermore, if want to control our an environment, these steps are really necessary for everyone. In conclusion, Although there are some reasons why pollution is increasingly, it can be solved by government as wll as people along with good efforts which i have already mentioned in this paragraph
In this
modren
era everyone
know
clearly
about
polution
is
being increased
day by day. There are
some
reasons why it does happen
as well
as well
solutions to solve this problem without face any problem. To
begin
with,
first
and foremost reason is that
people
prefer to
use
too much private vehicles.
Moreover
, it can be
seen
clearly
that in every city through traffic congestion. Last
but
not least is that we
cut
the trees
rapidly
.
in
addition to, everyone
know
about the value of trees like it protects our an environment.
For instance
, In Delhi when
people
drived
everyday
to
use
this type of vehicle Delhi has made
extremely
polluted place in India
On the other hand
, There are
some
solutions to solve this problem.
Firstly
, the
government
should
be made
strict
rules
against private vehicles.
Firstly
.
it
is
should
be limited
in public places
so
that it can be
reduced
. Apart from, we don't
cut
the tress
because
without tress our life is impossible in order to
live
.
Furthermore
, if want to control our an environment, these steps are
really
necessary for everyone.
In conclusion
, Although there are
some
reasons why pollution is
increasingly
, it can
be solved
by
government
as
wll
as
people
along with
good
efforts which
i
have already mentioned in this
paragraph
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IELTS essay Nowadays Pollution is increasing day by day. What are the causes and solutions of this problem?

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