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"The true definition of success is to have a healthy work-life balance. Happiness in either work or home is short-lived if it is not balanced by happiness in the other."

"The true definition of success is to have a healthy work-life balance. Happiness in either work or home is short-lived if it is not balanced by happiness in the other. " Lw6yR
The personal life is totally opposite to the professional life. The personal life is the course or state of an individual's life especially when viewed as the sum of personal choices contributing to one's personal identity. The people identified with their social role in their community. The personal life adds dimensions to your professional life and vice versa. If divide between professional life and personal life continues to become thin then one way to stay happy could be to star 'living' our professional life with a deeper personal touch and be a bit more professional in 'managing' your personal life. A people those are failed to give equal priority may fall in the failure. If someone failed in his personal then the person must be alone. Foreveryone both lives are important to survive in the world. The success is defined as achieving achievement in both personal and professional life. For example having a nice car, a beautiful home and a fancy job title could be considered professional success. On the other hand, the personal success may include the ability to travel interpersonal relationships, friendships and other factor that have little to do with professional success
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. The
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is the course or state of an individual's
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especially
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choices contributing to one's
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identity.
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identified with their social role in their community.
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The
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adds
dimensions to your
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and vice versa. If divide between
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professional
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and
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continues to become thin then one way to stay happy could be to star 'living' our
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professional
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life
with a deeper
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touch and be a bit more
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in 'managing' your
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life
. A
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then the person
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to survive in the world. The
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is defined
as achieving achievement in both
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and
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professional
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.
For example
having a nice car, a
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beautiful
home and a fancy job title could
be considered
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professional
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.
On the other hand
, the
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may include the ability to travel interpersonal relationships, friendships and other factor that have
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little
to do with
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professional
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success
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IELTS essay "The true definition of success is to have a healthy work-life balance. Happiness in either work or home is short-lived if it is not balanced by happiness in the other. "

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
194 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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